This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga
For A who is busy smudging.
Rituals
By
He thinks it is silly. But smudging the new home is necessary to purify it. As he says, "There is nothing more ludicrous than someone else's heart felt beliefs." Right! Is that why he promised me a dozen cracks with the leather brush in every room to christen the place?
The End
© Copyright BCC, 25 July 2003
Reviews
Mary <Gemladi(at)aol(dot)com>
I loved this a very funny banter! and as a witch who does smudge for real her homes I had to giggle while reading this as my husband has looked at me rather silly like while I do my protection and cleansing rituals, while whenever we have guests leave the house after an extended stay he says that he needs to christen each room of the house all over again
Sassy Jo <sassy_jolene(at)hotmail(dot)com>
OK, I don't know what smudging is. There I said it. I do know what cracks with a leather brush are. I think this mini-saga is pretty humorous in the very least. I get the idea of what the author is trying to convey. Originality is certainly there to an extent. And so I believe that this is pretty fair work. My condolences to A.
Brad <b_radleym(at)yahoo(dot)com(dot)au>
It's short, sweet, and funny.
Huh Chuh <huhchuh(at)yahoo(dot)com>
I like the clash of different beliefs upon each other. The smudging ritual reminds me of Hindu/Sikh rituals that people do when buying a new house or a new car. I'm glad that he matches her rituals with his own because this to me indicates a level of acceptance that mere words might not convey. Very nice job. Thank you.