This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Adult
The Cheeky Madam
By
Valerie Meilong <meilong@excite.com>
Mark was worried. It was not often his wife had a night out with the girls, but despite her promise to be home early it was gone midnight and she had still not returned.
It was half past two when she stumbled through the door.
He hugged her. "Thank heaven you're alright," he sighed.
Then his anger returned. "Where the hell've you been?"
"We went back to Mary's house. I s'pose we lost track of the time."
"Lost track? Do you know the time now? I've been worried sick."
"Ah!"
"How did you get home?"
"I walked. It's okay; there's nobody on the streets at this time at night."
He was livid. She'd said she'd get a taxi.
"God! How many women have been attacked walking home at night recently?"
"Sorry."
"Sorry!" Mark's blood pressure was rising rapidly.
Kate hiccupped. "Relax. I could've run if anyone came near me."
"In high heels? Anyway, we'll talk about it in the morning when you've sobered up. Now get up to bed," he snapped.
"No! If you've got something to say, say it now," she snarled.
He glared back at her. "Right! You've asked for it, now you're going to get it. Get your bottom over my lap!"
Kate went pale.
"What are you going to do?"
"Spank you -- hard."
"What! There's no need for that!"
Without replying he grabbed her wrist and dragged her to the sofa.
"No Mark, please...."
"You need a lesson, young lady."
In spite of her struggles he got her over his knee, then peeled her skirt back. He blinked as he saw her bare bottom.
"Where the hell are your knickers? I know you went out with them. I saw you put them on!"
"I gave them to Cynthia, in the pub."
"What!" he said, giving her a hard slap. "Why?"
"Ow! Stop it!"
"Tell...me...the...truth!" he said, delivering a slap between each word. "To Cynthia?"
"Yes, to Cynthia. Not to a fella, honest; she wet hers. I lent her mine."
He wondered whether to believe her, but he didn't imagine she'd be unfaithful.
"So not only did you walk back alone, but you did so in a short skirt wearing no knickers!"
"Yeah."
Mark continued his spanking.
She squealed, and wriggled. Her bottom was pink now, and he could hear quiet sobs, but he was determined to teach her a lesson. Eventually he stopped, and allowed her to get up.
"Have you learned your lesson?" he asked her sternly.
She sniffed, and tried to look contrite. "Yes dear."
She rubbed her bottom. It was beginning to glow delightfully erotically now.
She looked at him steadily, swallowed, and said "Actually, Mark, I'm glad I haven't any knickers on."
"Glad! Why glad?" he demanded.
She smiled at him coyly. "Because I'm ready!"
"Ready for what?" he asked in amazement.
"For the fuck you are going to give me."
"You cheeky bloody madam!" he said.
Then his anger faded, and he smiled.
"OK. Why not? You've kept me waiting long enough."
The End
© Copyright Valerie Meilong 24 July 2003
Reviews
Lori <peachesicu(at)aol(dot)com>
This was an OK story. Written well. It was a story that I can picture coming from a spanking movie. The plot was basic to the spanking scene. The problem was it wasn't very different, nothing jarred me to think, Wow. It was just a well written spanking story. I've seem a reviewer write: "This story didn't flow." (whatever that means for a story and not a poem?) Well, I like a story that has a kick in it. Something that makes it not flow like every other story. So this was, as I've stated, an OK story. It just didn't take much imagination. I hope the writer who wrote well, will try to throw something different into the mix on their next try.
Kessily
I felt a small squick at the idea of loaning someone used knickers grin and it was a VERY flimsy reason for not having any on I thought, but I found this to be a cute marital discipline story.
The title of the story is certainly appropriate she was definitely a cheeky madam, demanding sex after she had just been punished...I'm surprised her husband gave in when he had been so angry. I would have expected him to say no instead of smiling and giving in. I felt that was just slightly out of character for the personality that had been built up. But it was still a very solid read and I liked it!
<justacatfish(at)aol(dot)com>
To me, the scenario lacks a sense of originality, that is, the wife who comes in late from a night with the girls. This scenario over done. Also felt dialogue was stunted, formula writing.