This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Fanfiction
It was a struggle to decide whether to put this into fan fiction or first/last. A brief word of explanation for those of you who have not read the book Hannibal. Unlike in the movie, the book ends with Clarice and Dr. Lecter running away together. An odd ending, I thought (and the movie producers seem to have thought so too!). But it did give me the following story idea....
Quid Pro Quo
By
Kingspan <Kingspan1@yahoo.com>
"Quid pro quo, Clarice," he said, tapping the hairbrush against his palm. "Your naughty behavior has consequences."
"I understand, Dr. Lecter, but you really mean to spank me like a schoolgirl?"
"No, Agent Starling. I intend to spank you like a grown woman. You've been over boyfriends' knees, unless I am very much mistaken."
Clarice blushed. How he knew this was a mystery, but his deductions were seldom wrong. "What makes you think I would allow you to, much less to put those on me?" She pointed to his pair of handcuffs.
"Come now, Clarice. For one thing, you already think of me as a perverse father figure, and you accepted some very stern paternal discipline from your dear departed. It's written in your respect for authority and order. Secondly, you know you have no choice. I could force you over my knee in seconds, and you couldn't scream for fear of the police who pursue both of us. But to do it that way would offend against your chosen role for me...and previously mentioned sense of order."
"Why the handcuffs?"
Hannibal smiled. "Take down those jeans and panties, there's my good girl." Clarice, with only token reluctance, did as she was told, and approached the seated doctor.
"I've let him in far too deeply," thought Clarice. "He's seen that tiny, buried part of me that craves this, and I'm paying the price for allowing Hannibal Lecter inside my head."
Without another word she lay down across his lap, bottom exposed, and waited passively as he cuffed her to the nearby bedpost. "If you'd told me yesterday I'd let Lecter chain me up and trust him not to eat me...." she mused. "Still, there is something so naughty about being over a man's knee...rubbing against his leg...." She gasped abruptly as the first stroke lit her cheek on fire. This was someone who knew what he was doing, and she rapidly felt like a little girl again, barely hearing the deep voice scolding her, twisting and bucking unconsciously, unable to resist the tears welling behind her eyeballs, rolling down her face.
It took her several moments to realize it was over, and he had brought her to her hands and knees on the bed. She waited for him to take her from behind, but he showed no signs.
"Now, my foolish, handcuffed girl. It's time for dinner." Before Agent Starling could react, he was between her legs with a hand on each calf. Her scream died as she felt a warm, wet tongue on her clitoris. Now she let out a sob for the first time. So this was how Dr. Lector wanted to "eat" her....
After making love, she picked up the brush from the night stand and asked, "Quid pro quo, Dr. Lecter? You've been a naughty boy in your day, to say the very least."
"No, Agent Starling. Society may one day make me pay. But they haven't caught up with me yet."
The End
© Copyright Kingspan, 23 July 2003
Reviews
Huh Chuh <huhchuh(at)yahoo(dot)com>
I enjoyed reading this story. As a female switch, I feel that he too should have been well spanked and loved in return.
It's interesting that he chooses to see her as «Agent Darling» when his turn to be spanked arrives. I think that he wimped out of his spanking.
Great job on writing an interaction between two interesting characters in a short passage.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Mary <Gemladi(at)aol(dot)com>
This is one weird story, and I have to say something that I have never thought would be in spanking fiction of any kind, it had a funny moment to it in the last paragraph and also a horribly frightening moment with the eating paragraph. It is very hard to put a rating on this one, it was well written I have seen the movie (regrettably so) and it is on cue with the characters portrayed in the movie, I haven't read the book (and nor will I) so I can not validate as to whether or not it is on cue with those characters or not. but it was a well written story that oddly kept
me reading it even though I detested the movie.
Sir Hal <janhaltn(at)earthlink(dot)net>
I totally enjoyed the movie that this draws from. I rated this story based on it's own merits and not of the merits of the movie. I think that the author stayed true to the characters. I am not worried that they might have put their toes a millimeter over the copyright line. I'll leave that for others. I just kicked back and enjoyed the story for what it was. I have not read the book. I will take the word of the author that they did run off together. I look forward to reading more stories wrote by this author.
No, I have not seen the follow up movie that came out recently. Maybe when it comes out on DVD later I might take time to look at it. Wouldn't it be nice if this scene were added to it.