This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga
Snap
By
Cate Bronte <ouchigirl@hotmail.com>
"When I snap my fingers, you will wake and feel refreshed. You will not remember this conversation.
"When you hear the keyword, you will add a dozen strokes to the punishment you are administering. The keyword is ouch.
<snap>
"Michael, if you really meant it, I'm ready for my spanking."
The End
© Copyright Cate Bronte, 29 July 2003
Reviews
Don A. Landhill <dlandhill(at)aol(dot)com>
This is a very nice mini-saga. But I'm not quite clear if she is hypnotizing him, or vice versa. I think it must be her hypnotizing him, a very interesting form of topping from the bottom.
It is interesting to contrast this with the later entry Giving Up Smoking Is Painful .
Nice job. Thank you.
Pablo <pablo(dot)stubbs(at)newsguy(dot)com>
Led astray by cultural stereotypes, I read the hypnotist as male at first, which led to some confusion over the roles, but once I'd got it, the whole thing fell into place very well. (That's another cultural stereotype I fell into, of course: there's no reason why both characters can't be male.)
This is neat, clever, and entirely complete in fifty words. It has a fiendishly mind-bending aftertaste, too. However will the spanking come to an end? A very impressive entry for this category.
Lori <peachesicu(at)aol(dot)com>
I thought this mini-saga was bratalicious cute. Boy! I'm telling ya, I hope she is happy with the out come and doesn't over due her ouchies to much. What a sneaky way to get what she has coming. Excellent!
Huh Chuh <huhchuh(at)yahoo(dot)com>
Very fun little story with hypnotism used to get what the spankee wants. I wonder if I could do that successfully or be spanked for trying. I enjoyed reading this story. Thank you.