This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Parody
I was watching Fractured Fairytales, part of the Rocky & Bullwinkle show, and got an idea.
The Prince and the Enchanted Sleepers
By
Y Lee Coyote <YLeeCoyote@juno.com>
Part 1
The handsome prince was riding through the forest when he spotted a lass (yes, she was very beautiful as in all fairy tails) once again, stretched out on a pedestal under a glass cover (complete with vent holes).
"Another enchanted damsel. I'll bet this one expects to be awoken with a kiss followed by a wedding and a life of luxury." He gave a great sigh. "I guess I must do my duty." he said to his charger. With that, he removed the cover, lifted the beautiful damsel, sat down, put her over his lap, raised up her dress and each of her seven petticoats (each of a different color), pulled down her knickers and began to spank her bare bottom hard. This woke her and she screamed.
"What are you doing? You're suppose to kiss me."
"Not under the new protocols approved by the Ministry of Health; spanking is now the treatment of choice." He gave her a few more hard spanks and let her up.
She gave one last scream, pulled up her knickers and ran away yelling: "PERVERT!" losing her glass slippers as she went.
«Someday I'll find the right one» he thought as he rode off, «that's the third one this fortnight.»
Part 2
It was less than a week later when the Prince spotted the pedestal with another enchanted sleeper. As always, he rode over and inspected the body. Not a damsel this time but a youth. And in simple well-worn, but clean, peasant clothes.
«Sis won't care for this one at all. I'll just wake him and send him on.» he thought. Soon the lad was across his lap with his britches lowered to his ankles. The royal hand was quickly employed in turning the common bottom a royal crimson. As always, the spankee awoke but this one did not complain but rather accepted the spanking with promises of good behavior and apologies for past misdeeds. There was another reaction as well. The lad quickly developed a hard-on which the prince felt as he rubbed it on the tight hose. «Sis definitely won't like this one -- but I sure do.»
The prince stop spanking, caressed the hot butt and lifted him up. The lad immediately knelt before the prince and kissed the now bulging royal basket. The prince smiled and lowered his tights allowing the royal scepter to spring free. It was quickly engulfed by the lad and treated with all the respect do its owner especially when it expressed its happiness.
They adjusted their raiments. The prince mounted his great steed and lifted the lad up behind him. They rode off into the sunset to the forest retreat to consummate their engagement and to live happily ever after.
The End
© Copyright A.I.L., 15 July 2003
Reviews
Mary <Gemladi(at)aol(dot)com>
This was a very cute and funny twist on an old fairytale. I enjoyed the surprise at the end as well. Very well written.
I am sorry this isn't my usual fare so far as stories go, in fact its the first M/m story that I have read, so I am not to sure on what more to say it was well written and in that aspect, a good story.
Warm Hand Jack
This is a lightweight tale that parodies the original well, with humor and originality. The variation from kissing to spanking looks like a make-it-fit-the-SSC gimmick at first, but works out well in the end. I like the idea that the Prince, assuming the usual rules, presumed that he wanted a damsel; and found out otherwise -- an interesting twist -- only by experience. The lass's cry of «"PERVERT!"» must strike a chord for any of us who once thought that only non-spankos were normal!
Amusing modernizations such as «complete with vent holes» and «the new protocols» work well, as does fun phrasing such as «the royal hand [turned] the common bottom a royal crimson.» Numerous typos (fairy tails, suppose for supposed, lower for lowered, do for due, etc., etc.) mar the telling. In general, the entry reads smoothly and smilingly: well done.
Trisha Allen <trishaallen(at)mindspring(dot)com>
Wow! From what I've read, this seemed to be an original idea! Giving enough information to understand the situation at hand. Characters developed well. The spankings explained by the new protocols in motion. Though gay lover stories are not my favorite, this was a great story!