This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Ageplay
Treats
By
Zprymantis <Zprymantis@smilingwithteeth.com>
Daddy's parrot chirped at her and stretched out a wing. She put her hands behind her back to remind herself not to poke a finger in the cage. She whistled an answer and rocked back on her heels. The parrot walked along its perch toward her, tilted its head and focused a knowing eye. She was dressed like a candy corn, orange blouse and brown skirt swaying against her legs. She felt young and impulsive, Daddy's little girl, safe and happy.
Daddy fixed breakfast as she sat nearby on the carpet, legs crossed and panties showing, brushing her hair. Pancakes and eggs and bacon will fill her tummy. An extra large glass filled to the brim with juice that makes her hands seem small and clumsy. "It's too big, Daddy!" She was such a good girl, she drank it all.
Daddy opened the window and a summer breeze blew in and tickled her bare legs. She could hear the noises of the city far below, an ice cream truck played a tune, an ambulance hustled on its way, people all around them, yet they were alone.
Daddy walked over and hugged her and she smiled up at him and her bare feet rested on top of his, and they kissed and danced. He led her around the room and she giggled, and twirled, orange and brown blurry candy corn.
A naughty little girl gets led by the hand and tugged across her Daddy's knee. Her feet sticking straight out and her brown skirt lifted high and the white cotton candy panties get tugged down just so. Daddy spanks and she squeals and wiggles and kicks. "No Daddy no, it's too hard!" Her bottom is candy apple red and warm.
Daddy decides to cane her, special thick stripes and wrap around licorice whip lines. Something to caress, soft oohs and ahhs as sensitive fingertips ride the lumps. His eyes twinkle with pride as she smiles a shy smile.
Bathtime, lots of fun, Daddy washes all her parts with loving care. A soapy finger and a Daddy's matter of fact manner means no time to be embarrassed. Bottoms up and bummy hole washed, her mouth blowing egg-cream fizzy bubbles in the bath as Daddy's finger slides slowly in and out.
Clean and fresh, white nightshirt and white cotton panties make the little girl feel new. Lemon ices are shared on the terrace and their feet prop up together as they sit side by side. Her punished bottom rests gently on the chair. Bright city lights stretch forever below them. They are part of the sky, as father moonpie looks across at them and grins. The white sugar stars mist the sky surrounding them.
Bedtime and the parrot snuggles up to the bars as Daddy whispers his good night. The cover floats down and covers the cage. Snuggled deep in bed, a little girl opens one knowing chocolate drop eye and smiles. They are alone.
The End
© Copyright Zprymantis, 12 July 2003
Reviews
SirHal <janhal(at)midsouth(dot)rr(dot)com>
This was a good story to start the day with. I received it to review when I got my first emails of the day. The story was an easy read and very smooth. I enjoyed the word pictures. I could see them on the twenty-second floor of a New York apartment building. Sitting out there on their balcony. Please keep writing. I wish that all age-play stories were as easy to read as this one. It was fun.
Ted <quixotoes(at)aol(dot)com>
This story is marked by sweet poetic images of a little girl, dressed like a candy corn, and her daddy. There is a sexual element that may squick some readers, but it is handled just right, in the context of the soapy, post-spanking bedtime bath every little girl needs. The story might have been a little more scrupulous with punctuation, and there is a parrot at the beginning and end that serves either as a character, an omniscient observer or a some other symbol I wish I had understood.
Kent Stoneking <kentls01(at)msn(dot)com>
Although I generally find ageplay with inappropriate (in my opinion) aspects (e.g., the severe caning and the anal play) disturbing, this was actually a very sweetly written story about a day in the lives of two people whose relationship, quite obviously, works for them, and so is none of anyone else's business. The neatly interwoven candy references made it very sweet indeed!