This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Adult
No Sweats: A Moving Tale
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Okay, I really did go too far! It was the end of a long day of packing and getting ready to move; including umpteen trips to the storage facility. It's just that what needed to be done was so obvious, so very,very uncontrollably tempting. It wasn't hard at all ... one hand pulled the material of the shorts leg up -- the other smacked away with glee!! Did I mention that it was the inside front of his thigh? Such a surge of delight all through me, such silly laughter -- so very short lived. Do you know what he did? He turned me over, pulled my pants down: (my much-too-easy-definitely-not-made-for-the-serious-escape sweat pants) right in the car, in the parking lot just off the main road -- and -- spanked me! Me! (He said he'd do it again, too!)
The End
© Copyright Rosa, 11 July 2003
Reviews
<justacatfish(at)aol(dot)com>
I don't know about this one. I just don't see much of anything there.
Huh Chuh <huhchuh(at)yahoo(dot)com>
Dear Author, A fun moving tale which made me smile. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Patricia <patricia(at)cedar(dot)net>
Hmmm, bet she thinks twice about doing that again. Or at the very least, makes sure she has an escape plan in mind! Cute short.
In all seriousness though. I think this story could use a little more to it. It leaves you with an awful lot of questions unanswered. And since it didn't even come close to the word count allowed, I personally would have liked some of the questions answered.
Nevertheless, it was a quick, cute paragraph which conveyed the actions of misbehavior and consequences.