This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga
Lesson
By
Y Lee Coyote <YLeeCoyote@juno.com>
The angry father flipped his naked son over his lap "It's an augury of fertility only for mere mortals You're not to pee-pee on any god – especially your mother!"
"Nooooooo I'll be good, father; please."
Vulcan was not deterred from making a corporeal impression on the mischievous Cupid.
SPANK!!
"WHAAAAA...."
The End
© Copyright A.I.L., 28 June 2003
This was inspired by Venus and Cupid by the Italian painter Lorenzo Lotto in the Metropolitan Museum of Art. A reasonable image is at: http://www.metmuseum.org/Collections/search-the-collections/110001362?rpp=20&pg=1&ft=Lorenzo+Lotto&pos=2 along with a description and a couple of closeups.
Reviews
Jessie
I really enjoyed this brief, funny tale of corporeal punishment. It's quite clever and original, a very good mini-saga entry.
Pam <PamiMac(at)aol(dot)com>
OK at first I read this and had no clue as to what was going on because I missed the link. And as usual, the fearless leader pointed it out to me. So NOW I've seen it and it is a cute story. I was feeling pretty stupid when first I read it because of missing the link. Now I say, no more art stories ok please? Unless you put the link in the front for those of us who don't read the fine print.
Trisha Allen <trishaallen(at)mindspring(dot)com>
I'm extremely surprised, at how the author wove so much, into such few words. It gives a good quick glimpse of the scene. I think this could be broadened into a great detailed story, if the author had an interest, to further develop the story.