This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Verse
Gee Whiz
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No longer the giggling gigolette,
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The End
© Copyright BCC, 26 June 2003
Reviews
Lori <peachesicu(at)aol(dot)com>
Man this was a mouthful of a verse. A good tongue twister <eg>. It was a good use of G's. The picture translation of spanko verse was a bit overwhelming. Meaning: I really had to read it over and over to picture the scene.
Kessily
The author of this very short verse seems to have found a way to use more G's then I have ever found in a single paragraph before, including some words I have never even heard before. They don't quite manage to use ONLY G words and there is a bit of stretching in places, but still it is very clever.
Kent Stoneking <kentls01(at)msn(dot)com>
Interesting attempt that, for some reason, just leaves me cold. The use of all the G words was amusing, but I'd describe the overall effect as cute rather than anything else.