This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga
This story's setting is April of 2003 in the U.S.A.
Rhetorical Question
By
Crimson Kid <CrimsnKid6@aol.com>
"Groping my ass in public -- that's unacceptable!" Charisma's eyes flash.
"I just felt like it...."
She grabs the wooden spatula. "Now I feel like blistering your bare butt plenty hard -- Should I?.....Answer me!"
"Rhetorical question -- answer's assumed."
"I want an answer!" She sounds serious.
The Moment of Truth. "Well...."
The End
© Copyright Crimson Kid, 26 June 2003
Reviews
Many <Gemladi(at)aol(dot)com>
This is a funny one especially since I know people who do this kind of stuff in public and get their wives mad at them, but is it a story, I really had a very hard time with this one.
C_bear <teddybearbrat(at)cableone(dot)net>
I never like those kinds of questions...the lesson is deserved and certain, but she wants an answer anyway, hmmm. Maybe if I agree quickly it won't be so bad, bur then again how do I agree to something I don't want...that's how I would feel at that moment, knowing that neither answer is going to help and probably getting more because I didn't answer at all. Hands you a soft pillow and some aloe lotion...looks like you will need it.
Warm Hand Jack
This apparently lightweight vignette actually carries a lot of freight: she's assuming that a negative response is obvious...but since she insists on a direct answer, which he tries to avoid, he's going to take a deep breath and come out to her.
It took me several readings to figure this out; I must be slow, because once I got the hang of it, there was no doubt about what his answer was going to be. The only doubt is how she will react to his revelation. However...since her every phrase is classic Domme, I think they're both going to wish he'd spoken up much earlier. The only truly unanswered question, then, is: how long has she been hinting at her nature, wanting (but not expecting) to find it complemented by his? For me, the fact that they didn't find out earlier is much more credible in an F/M situation than if it had been M/F.
This is very well written, with telling dialogue, and with much more to it than it appears at first reading.
Huh Chuh <huhchuh(at)yahoo(dot)com>
I love this story. The groper should definitely be spanked regardless of whether or not s/he admits to deserving a spanking. Thank you for this fun tale.