This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Child
I wasn't sure what category this belonged in. The idea for this story was stolen from another source, though not so much that it's really fanfiction. The characters are adults, but the spanking is received by a teenager. Is a teen schoolgirl a child?
Sherry
By
Hello Sherry? It's me.
Hi. I was just thinking about you Sherry about us. How well it's working out. I mean, so many other guys I met on Match.com -- it got depressing. Married guys saying they're single. "Average build," and the winner of the Danny de Vito look-alike contest shows up.
Yeah, "woman, early forties." Born in the early forties is more like it.
And the things these guys expect you to do.
What?
In bed mostly, but other stuff, too ....
That's kinda why I called.
Hmmm?
Well, I want to say this before this gets much deeper. It's a little awkward.... It's about sex.
It hasn't been good for you?
No. I mean yes. I mean, it's been very good. But....
Not enough?
No. That's not it.
Then what?
Well, it's just there's something about me you should know. I don't know how to say this.
It's o.k. Just blurt it out.
The truth is, I like spanking. That's what really turns me on. After my last relationship, I promised myself I wasn't going to live without it. What I'm trying to say is, if I can't make spanking part of the relationship, as good as it's been, I can't continue.
You want me to spank you?
No. I want to spank you.
I don't think so. I'd like to stay together. But not with that.
Why not?
Cause it'd hurt, duh.
We could just try it. Some girls like it.
Not me.
How do you know? C'mon, just once. I'd really hate to end this without trying.
No. I've been spanked, and believe me, I didn't enjoy it.
You have? When?
Oh, you know, when I was a teenager. This snooty boarding school I was sent to in England. God, were they strict. One small example: My roommate -- this new girl Fiona. First week, she gets caught whispering in line, a minor offense.
The teacher takes her to his study and lectures her. She has to say that bad girls are punished on their bottoms -- "their bare bottoms" -- and then take off her skirt. Then he makes her take down her panties and stand in front of him and ask for her spanking.
Poor Fiona, she was mortified. She stood there, trying to cover herself, head down, practically in tears already, asking to be spanked. Finally, he puts her across his lap and spanks her for about fifteen minutes, with her squirming and kicking and saying she's sorry and begging him to stop.
Her bottom was still red when she told me about it afterward. I told her it wasn't so bad. He'd only used his hand. Wait till she got the tawse or the cane. I started rubbing some cream on it, and... But that's the longer version of the story.
That really happened?
Oh, God yes. I could tell you a thousand more stories like that.
Really? A thousand?
Yep.
Maybe let's not end this relationship just yet. Talk to you tomorrow night?
Sure. Bye.
The End
© Copyright Bird, 25 June 2003
Reviews
Patricia <patricia(at)cedar(dot)net>
Interesting way to put a modern, spanking twist on Scheherazade: 1001 Arabian Nights. I am impressed that he was able to risk losing Sherry to explain his own needs and desires. I am curious though...can stories fulfill a desire to actually spank? And will the telling of these stories eventually lead to a desire to play out the story. This story grew on me the more times I read it. Nicely done.
Sassy Jo <sassy_jolene(at)hotmail(dot)com>
This entry was interesting to me. I like the way the author tells the story through a phone call. The story itself isn't incredibly original, but it has good imagery. One request would be that the author tries to make it easier to see who is saying what. Perhaps double spacing between voices might be appropriate.
Redhawk <redhawk(at)screaminet(dot)com>
This story is nice. It is well written. Doesn't have any grammar or technical mistakes that can so often take away from a story. But the author admits he/she doesn't really know where it belonged. This child was a teenager and it was a sexual not a disciplinarian relationship. Plus there was no actual spanking involved just a story about somebody else's spanking. I would have preferred to have seen more actual spanking in the story.