This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-Saga
Always Morning
By
Throwing back covers to find her bare, he stopped, distracted. The sun on her skin.... Her body glowed as if filled with light. How beautiful!
"Hey!" she called, unspanked, dissatisfied.
He looked at her skin -- raised his hand -- and couldn't. He found himself across her lap, both of them laughing....
The End
© Copyright Rosa, 02 June 2003
Reviews
c_bear <teddybearbrat(at)cableone(dot)net>
This story painted such a word picture in my mind that I could almost see what was happening. It's amazing how much can be said with so little words. I can picture the surprised look on his face as she pulls him over her lap, and you just know without reading it that she is about to satisfy herself, since he didn't do it for her.
Thanks and keep them coming.
Jon <mrheadmstr(at)aol(dot)com>
This mini-saga caused the corners of my mouth to curl up and my eyes to twinkle; the result of a successful juxtaposition of anticipation and skewed payoff. This author painted a picture in my mind in very few words.
Good job.
Haron <haron(at)newsguy(dot)com>
Ah, the joys of switching, and the joys of sharing the kink with one's partner! This story is very uplifting and optimistic, very well done.