This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission.  Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice.  The author would appreciate your comments

Category:  Parody/Poetry  based on You're the Top by Cole Porter
 

You're my Top

By

Don A. Landhill <DLandhill@aol.com>

You're my top! I just love your paddle,
You're my top! When you say, "skedaddle!",
I hear melodies, I hear symphonies, though i grouse,
You rule the house!

I love your style, though I try to tease ya'
you make me smile, but when I fail to please ya'
I get hairbrush smacks, paddle whacks, the Strop!

I'm your baby, I'm your bottom,
You're my Top!

The End

© Copyright by Don A. Landhill  June 2002

Reviews

Abrat4you  <abrat4you(at)aol(dot)com>
Very...Very good...I found myself singing along...well done!!!

Haron  <haron(at)newsguy(dot)com>
Lovely and clever praise to the tops among us. It would sound particularly well chanted by a couple of red-bottomed admirers.

Dyke Grrl  <dyke.grrl(at)verizon(dot)net>
I was inspired to find the music for this song, and the sprightly tune goes quite well with the way that you've worded the poem/song. Cheerful and fun.

Jodi  <ladiejj(at)webtv(dot)net>
This parody is humorous and fun. The words are very original and fit. I found myself singing the words to the tune. Very descriptive.

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