This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Parody/Poetry
'F' Factor
By
Courtney <Courtenesca@aol.com>
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Facetious Fraulein.
Familiar fragging.
Furious funnel.
Fantabulous fire.
Feeling fine.
Flammable flair.
Fey frenzy.
Fabled fun.
Fearful flying
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The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Frank <sswitcher(at)yahoo(dot)com>
Frivolous, foolish fragment! Feels fairly feeble! Forces formidable forfeit! Fourteen fiery floggings? (Facetious finding, fortunately!)
Sarah Nada <circler73(at)hotmail(dot)com>
I've found the alphabet poems really interesting, and this one is no exception. Most of the verses/stanzas work for me in a big way, but a few of them feel like a stretch. I think that just relates to the difficulty of finding enough F words (or G words, or whatever) that flow together and tie in to the subject at hand.
In this particular poem, I would have been happiest if it had skipped directly from the first verse to the fourth. But I enjoyed reading it in any case, and goodness knows I'm no expert.
Tami <tamishy(at)webtv(dot)net>
I think these ABC stories have lost their edge. It's just words now. It's a fun idea, but got old a little too fast. This is just my opinion, but I think this story falls flat.
Alex Birch <alexbirch(at)blueyonder(dot)co(dot)uk>
Well an orginal list of F words as opposed to the ones I generally get in the pub but , to me, these sort of exercises dont go anywhere. Maybe Im just not a poet or a visionary, I just like a good yarn at which Courtney is better than most but this kind of piece leaves me cold. Sorry.