This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Not my kink I spent this past weekend watching a Twilight Zone marathon on TV and being spanked by a particularly evil and sadistic Top from this newsgroup. Here are the results of that gluttony of Twilight Zone television viewing and spanking overload. Not our kink, but definitely A - OK.
The Tickle Zone
By
Zprymantis <zprymantis@smilingwithteeth.com>
After her bath, Zoey rummages through her sock drawer for a pair of socks, bounces onto the bed next to her Daddy, and sits cross-legged. She rubs moisturizing cream on her feet, and smiles with teeth at Steven. Normally she calls him Daddy, especially at moments like this, when the entire world is forgotten. It's just the two of them living within an episode of a black and white sixties sitcom.
"Daddy, how about I rub some lotion into your feet?"
"Sure Pumpkin, my feet feel sort of dry and tired, that would be nice."
Submitted for your approval, one Zoey Mantis, a girl, who until this moment had considered herself a normal pervert. Red bottoms, hairbrushes and the feel of her panties slowly being lowered across her twin trembling buttocks are what she originally envisioned for this evening, until by a twist of fate she finds herself approaching the more misunderstood and ticklish areas of The Twilight Zone.
"Ah Daddy," Zoey smirks gleefully as she tucks her fingers into the elastic of his socks. "I want to hear some begging!"
"Very naughty, young lady." Daddy smiles with teeth and wiggles his toes around inside their socks approvingly. "Ok then. Pleeeease, please don't do it, please don't take my socks down. How's that?"
"Purrrrfect. Just perfect! Still, you know the rules Daddy. It simply must be done. This is serious business, this is discipline!" Zoey slowly lowers Daddy's socks down to his ankles and then across the heel, tugs at the toes and reveals first one foot and then another.
Squeezing the green lotion onto her hand from the bottle, she lifts a foot onto her lap and rubs her hands together smiling up at her Daddy. "Now this is gonna be one of the top ten foot messages of the entire year!"
Her hands surround his foot with a sudden shock of cool slipperiness. Sliding up with a slight twisting motion, she grins gleefully as her fingers reach his toes.
"Hahahahhahahahha"
"Now be a good Daddy, and don't clench, it's important to relax you know."
Zoey takes a finger, and with the most evil grin imaginable, starts probing between her Daddy's toes. Zoey backs off just as Daddy appears to be about to safeword, then slides one hand across the tops of his feet and gently messages his less ticklish heel.
"See, that wasn't so bad was it?"
As Daddy pants and clutches his heart, Zoey grabs hold of his second foot, and repeats the treatment. This time Daddy squirms around on the bed laughing hysterically as Zoey firmly lectures and probes between each wiggling phalange.
Into each life a little retribution must fall. For Steven, years of strict yet fair discipline meted out upon the naughty orbs of Zoey have gone full circle. His Achilles heel set upon with jubilant delight by a young lady emboldened by the shadowed and vast mysteries of the Tickle Zone.
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Kate <ecattiva(at)aol(dot)com>
This was a very funny, shiver inducing story. In this reader's opinion, there is no greater agony than the can't-breathe-can't-stop-laughing-but-think-I'm-literally-going-to-die feeling of having one's toes tickled, but it's great to read about it happening to someone else, 'specially a deserving top. :-) And you did a really, really great job of describing the tickling in the same terms that you normally describe a spanking. Fabulous episode!
Pam <pamiMac(at)aol(dot)com>
Cute story. Z is a good writer of real life and this feels very real life. There are inside jokes I'm not familiar with I'm guessing but written for her true friend. Nice parallel to her spankings and the spank speak. :)
Dyke Grrl <dyke.grrl(at)verizon(dot)net>
Great story, Z. It's probably most fun for those who have read your scene reports, and thus know how you're turning Steven's own words against him. The brattiness is delightful.
Owen Williamson <ashthorn(at)maildulf(dot)com>
Not my kink, either. I presume this is intended to be humorous, and if so, it works. A pleasant enough read. Thanks.