This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga
Some memories are indelible .... Particularly for children.
Unworthy
By
Fifty years later, Judy's spanking through the wall echo's still. Kate counts off the crisp swats. Hears Judy's plaintive entreaties. "Stooooop, Daddy! I'll be a gooood girl!" Pictures a tearful daughter cuddling on Daddy's lap. Peaceful. Back in good grace.
Hears her Daddy's cruel, "Never!! For the likes of you."
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Needy Wench <needywench(at)hotmail(dot)com>
The problem with super short stories is that they pack a lot into a small space, but can sometimes seem obtuse. This story is very evocative, but leaves me wondering at the end what exactly the last line means - who is it being spoken to, and to what purpose. But, as I said...very evocative!
Dyke Grrl <dyke.grrl(at)verizon(dot)net>
What a sad story. You fit so very much into the short space.
Mary Catherine <marycatherine(at)saintfrancis-sfg(dot)net>
This is an extremely tight, well-written story, filled with anguish and emotion. It's difficult to capture a mood in such a short story, but this one grabbed me immediately. With just a few words, I could imagine myself watching the long-ago scene play out and feel Kate's heartache.
Owen Williamson <ashthorn(at)maildulf(dot)com>
A neat little tale that tugs at the heart. The author has done well to rouse so much emotion in such a short story.