This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga
Reported Operational Deficiencies of Certain Cosmetic Prostheses
By
Mara Maharakshasa <MaraMahaRakshasa@aol.com>
Mimi's so sexy, with her fake elastomeric butt. No one will yell 'funky chicken' today.
Smooth globes and appealing buttcrack peek from her cut-offs.
Mop-handle thin, her bared midriff is perfect. Her bra is padded: Temptress!
The construction worker's beefy hand slaps her. The false butt deflates:
"Floooooofppppffff!!"
A megafart.
The End
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Reviews
Dyke Grrl <dyke.grrl(at)verizon(dot)net>
This is a fun concept, and it has something of the mood of an advertisement, as the author intended. The last few lines seem somewhat out of place in an advertisement, though, and the overall mood is a little flat. However, it's an amusing mini-saga, and does fairly well for the space constraints.
Haron <haron(at)newsguy(dot)com>
A pure horror story, this. But I suppose, for a guy who has to suffer from being able to see but not touch, there's a certain sence of sweet revenge. Rarely one smack is this effective.
Pam <pamiMac(at)aol(dot)com>
Interesting words used here. Not sure I get it exactly but kind of an intriguing whoppee cushion I'd say.
Sarah Nada <circler73(at)hotmail(dot)com>
This mini-saga has a memorable punchline, and while it doesn't include much in the way of spanking it is admirably buttcentric.