This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: First/Last
Tom Sawyer
By
Joe Whatever <joewhatever845@hotmail.com>
The next girl was Becky Thatcher. Tom was trembling from head to foot with excitement and a sense of the hopelessness of the situation.
"Please, Aunt Polly", Tom wailed. "Im 18 years old!" "Im too old to get a licking!"
"Youre also too old to be peeking at the girls down by the swimming hole, Tom Sawyer!" Aunt Polly said sternly as she handed the birch rod to Becky.
Becky smiled down at the trembling Tom as she teasingly tapped the rod against his backside. "You know, Aunt Polly, I bet Tom cant even feel the rod through these overalls", Becky said.
Tom pleaded for mercy, but Beckys arguments soon swayed Aunt Polly. The girls giggled merrily as Aunt Polly took down Toms overalls. Tom was horrified to be stripped to his boxers, but Becky still wasnt satisfied.
Becky looked Tom up and down appraisingly. "If wont be a real punishment unless he drop his drawers..." Becky added mischievously.
Tom pleaded for mercy, but when Aunt Polly nodded the other girls quickly grabbed Toms arms. Becky smiled evilly at Tom as she teasingly slid the blushing young mans underpants down to his knees, slyly rubbing him to ensure the desired results.
"Tom Sawyer, how dare you!" Aunt Polly shrieked as the young women burst into peals of laughter. "Put that THING down at once!"
Becky smiled as she teasingly lifted his stiffness with the birch. "Are you EXCITED Im going to tan your little fanny, Tommy?" Becky said sweetly. "Well then turn around and stick your cute little bottom up in the air, you naughty boy!"
Tom gritted his teeth and fought back tears as he obeyed the humiliating command.
It was a full 20 minutes before each of the young ladies had their turn with the switch and the tearful Tom was finally allowed to dress. Becky Thatcher smiled at her boyfriend as she playfully tapped the rod against her palm. "Next time youll think twice before you spy on a bunch of naked girls, Tom Sawyer!"
"Becky, did you say naked?" Aunt Polly said. "But you told me that you were wearing your swimming costumes!" "18 is too old to be skinny dipping, young lady!"
Becky instantly realized that she had said too much. She felt a lump in her throat as the smiling Tom took the switch out her hand.
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Tom teasingly rubbed the switch against Beckys tight bare backside as he surveyed the row of naked female bottoms before him. He spent several seconds measuring out imaginary strokes as Becky wiggled her cute fanny in tense anticipation.
But then Tom walked to the other end of the line.
Becky squirmed helplessly at the first girls pitiful cries. To her horror Becky realized that Tom was going to spank her last.
Tom grinned as he noticed his pretty girlfriends bottom wiggling expectantly. Becky was trembling from head to foot with excitement and a sense of the hopelessness of the situation.
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Margaret <wessyLA(at)aol(dot)com>
This is a cute twist on the classic tale and excellent use of the first/last injunction. It also gave me insight into the mind of a switch. Thank you for sending this along.
Dyke Grrl <dyke.grrl(at)verizon(dot)net>
I like the way that you used Tom and Becky not only for the lines of the story, but also as a variation on the category: first and last. The story moves quickly, and the background story is familiar enough that you don't need to do much more than sketch it in. I like the twist at the end, and the descriptions of the teens' pleasures in the punishment, all in front of Aunt Polly's watchful eyes.
Steve <steve(at)circuslights(dot)com>
Oh, very clever.... The first spanking was wonderful, but the twist at the end was magnificent.
Simon <srb(at)imrryr(dot)demon(dot)co(dot)uk>
A nice reversal story, with cruel Becky getting her comeuppance. Some nice images here, and the way in which Tom's humiliation is progressed was particularly effective.