This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: First/Last
Skyfall
By
Starship <starship_64@yahoo.com>
It was raining in Los Angeles; dark clouds blocking the sky. A blessing perhaps. Not even the eggheads knew where on Earth the comet would strike, so who needed a constant reminder hanging overhead?
I found Melody in a bar packed with those dregs who remained in the city losing themselves in one last party. There were grumbles when I dragged her off the dance floor, but no one interfered. "Are you ready?" I shouted over the music. "We were supposed to be at the cabin hours ago."
"Hey bro, you're here!" she replied, slurring her words slightly. She had a glass in her hand, and I could smell the alcohol on her breath. "Go get a drink; it's all free tonight."
"No time," I told her. "That comet's going to hit in less than four hours. We've got to get up into the mountains in case it comes down in the ocean."
Mel stamped her foot. "You're no fun!"
"You're drunk."
"Damn straight!" With an exaggerated motion she lifted her glass and took a sip. "If you had any sense you'd be drunk too."
I sighed. "The others are waiting for us. We have to go."
"One more dance. There's some cute guys here."
"No Mel."
"Yes Scott." She leaned forward, grinning broadly. "There's nothing you can do about it."
"The hell there isn't." Grabbing my sister by the arm I dragged her outside.
"Let me go," she demanded as I marched her across the parking lot. "God damn it, I said let me go! It's raining out here."
Ignoring Mel's protests, I kept a firm grip on her arm until we reached my bike. "Now put on your helmet and let's go."
"You hurt my arm you jerk!" Without warning she slapped me hard across the face. "Asshole."
"That's enough!" I roared. Grabbing her arm again, I dragged her to a pickup that was parked a short distance away and sat down on the bumper. I wrestled her unceremoniously across my lap, clamping her legs between mine to keep her from kicking. She reached back and tried to hit me, so I pinned her wrist up behind her back too.
"Let go of me!" she demanded. My only reply was to flip her black leather skirt up above her waist and bring my hand down hard on her upturned bottom. Mel yelled and tried to buck, but I tightened my grip and continued spanking her as the rain pounded down on us.
I didn't stop until my hand was aching and Mel was sobbing hard. When I finally let her up she just stood there trembling and rubbing her bottom.
"Are you ready to go now?" I asked.
Mel nodded. "I'm sorry."
As we climbed onto my bike she leaned forward. "Look... um... thanks for... well for not leaving me behind," she said quietly.
I nodded and kicked the engine to life. "No charge." The rain continued to fall unabated as we rode off into the night.
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
John <johnb(at)ssec(dot)wisc(dot)edu>
I like this. It's a real story that doesn't have to contrive a reason to incorporate its required first/last. It's on topic, and it hints of a past and a future for the characters. I hope they reach their mountain, although the ejecta which don't quite reach escape velocity are going to come down everywhere in the whole world. Watch out for burning rocks.
Pam <pamiMac(at)aol(dot)com>
I liked the combination of real life feeling and yet a science fiction feeling combined with the spanking feeling. The spanking was needed, he gave, she received. Nicely written.
Anne <Ladyanne60(at)aol(dot)com>
A classic spanking to knock some sense into this girl, and save her life as well. This was a wonderful spanking fiction set in a science fiction background. The characters are all too believable. A heroic brother, a bratty sister who wants to have a little fun on her last night on earth. With the inclement weather making it worse, she gets what she needs ... and rightly deserves!
Sarah Nada <circler73(at)hotmail(dot)com>
Skyfall centers on a looming natural disaster, but the aspect that pushes my buttons is the stern, protective older brother figure. Overall, the story is fast paced and pleasantly suspenseful.