This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Edge Because the characters are not all humans?
Doll Revolution
By
Mara Maharakshasa <MaraMahaRakshasa@aol.com>
There's something tougher about Barbie today. Alicia thinks it's the new outfit she's just bought her. Dominatrix Barbie has a totally new attitude. Alicia grins happily, and shakes her head. Poor Ken, he's in for one big surprise the next time I get them together.
The short leather skirt and ultra-high heels look just right. So do the crotchless bikini panties and push-up bra in black lace. Alicia prefers her without the snug-fitting leather jacket and wraparound shades, but they improve her image in her tough new 'mobile: A jet black jeep with oversized tires.
Alicia is impressed with the rest of the outfit: the flogger and leather strap that fit so tidily into Barbie's hand. The little pouch containing a gag, handcuffs and ankle restraints. But most of all, this beautiful strap-on dildo that buckles so snugly around Barbie's thighs and waist on its leather harness. The phallus is the size of Barbie's forearm, and precisely detailed. She admires the erect flesh-colored shaft, and the thick, gleaming purple glans that seems to throb with life. She tickles it with her tongue and feels a thrill between her legs. Yes, Ken is going to learn some new tricks tonight.
She reflects on last week's transplant surgery with Ken: the effort she'd spent gluing on a small erect penis, and a crescent of chestnut pubic hair. How Barbie had laughed when she'd seen it! But, ladylike as always, she'd acceded to the pathetic hunger Ken had shown, and they'd fucked until the wee hours of the morning. Later, Alicia decided that the freshly grafted wang had probably been appropriate for an ordinary couple, but not on the grandiose scale required by these two. Barbie's impossible contours demanded a Herculean tool. Well, now she has one, Alicia chuckles. And won't Ken be pleased, after he gets over the shock?
She snuggles under the sheets with Barbie, kicking off her pajama bottoms. There, Barbie, now, what are we going to do to that Ken, darling?
Barbie smiles enigmatically, as blonde and pert as ever. 'Well, first, he's going to get on his knees and kiss my shoes. Yes. He's going to look up and see the bulge under my skirt. Just imagine his face as I take it off, and he sees this dong, huh? He'll be trembling. But I won't listen to any excuses. He's going to lick the shaft. Open his mouth wide and suck on it. He's stripping, right there. Showing off his little hard on. Let me gag him, handcuff his wrists behind him. I'll bend him over the hood of the jeep, and spread his legs wide. So his ass is all mine. I'll take the strap to his backside, whip his back and thighs, till he's begging me to stop. Then fuck him, till he begs...'
The phone rings.
Damn! Did their flight land already? She's got to get moving, and pick up Bob and the kids, before he panics and starts calling the in-laws.
The End
© Copyright by Mara Maharakshasa, 2002. All rights are reserved by the author. Do not retransmit, store (except for personal use) or publish without permission.
Reviews
Needy Wench <needywench(at)hotmail(dot)com>
Well you might think it's edgy because not all the characters are humans, but I think it's edgy because of the parent/adult aspect. Just too weird for me: Mom playing out fantasies with the kids toys. What's the word? Squick!
Pam <pamiMac(at)aol(dot)com>
This is an interesting fantasy this woman has. It is kinda dark and edgy in a plastic sort of way <g>. I've seen a picture of Dominatrix Barbie and I just can't believe she'd be so mean to Ken...but I can hope. Not a bad story.
Sarah Nada <circler73(at)hotmail(dot)com>
In introducing this story, Mara mentioned that for her it fits into the edge category because not all of the characters are human. From my POV, though, it would be much edgier (even squicky) if thay were human.
Be that as it may, Doll Revolution is an engaging story. And it gave me a whole new perspective on Barbie's relationship with Ken...
Steve <steve(at)circuslights(dot)com>
Cleverly written. Interesting idea using dolls to tell the story. But, it doesn't quite work for me. Perhaps if the f word hadn't been used.....