This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Adult This story's setting is July of 2002 in a suburban home in the U.S.A.
Truth or Consequences
By
The Crimson Kid <CrimsnKid6@aol.com>
Barbara's nimble fingers lower my punishment outfit's seat flap.
"There, that's good--your bare buns are sticking up nicely." She pats each buttock with the Spencer paddle. "Remember what you get two swats for, Paul?"
"Uhhhh..." My mind feels fuzzy, aware of my vulnerability.
"Hesitation...evasiveness...contradicting yourself...anything dishonest, hurtful or disrespectful, by my interpretation...breaking position." She ruffles my hair. "If you're as sharp-witted and articulate as you think, your bottom should remain pale."
"Well..." My buttcheeks are quivering, nakedly upturned over the couch's arm.
"Let's begin; I'll switch to the strap and cane later. Ready?"
"Okay, honey."
"Disrespectful!" SMACK!! SMACK!! The paddleswats sting sharply. "Try again."
"Yes, ma'am."
"That's better...Does this nautical outfit make me look fat?"
"Nuh-No, ma'am."
"Would you tell me if it really does?"
"Well, that depends--"
"Evasive!" SMACK!! SMACK!! Boy, she's swinging hard. "Answer..."
"I'd tell you, ma'am."
"Even if it would hurt my feelings?"
"Yes, ma'am."
"Hurtful!" SMACK!! SMACK!! "You'd hurt my feelings?" "No, ma'am."
"Contradictory!" SMACK!! SMACK!! My derriere's tingly hot. "You'll always tell me the truth?"
"Ah, well..."
"Hesitant!" SMACK!! SMACK!! Damn, that paddle smarts. "Answer..."
"Yes, ma'am."
"Dishonest!" SMACK!! SMACK!! She giggles as my hips squirm. "So much for your fanny staying white, sweetie." She exchanges the paddle for the razor strap. "Let's talk about my girlfriend Miranda now...Do you consider her attractive?"
"Yes, ma'am."
"So you're attracted to Miranda?"
"I wouldn't exactly--"
"Evasive!" THWACK!! THWACK!! Supple leather cracks against my exposed asscheeks. "Are you?"
"No, ma'am."
"Then you find her unattractive?"
"Well, honey..."
"Hesitant!" THWACK!! THWACK!! "Disrespectful too!" THWACK!! THWACK!! She's plastering my tender undercheeks with that licking-hot leather. "Answer..."
"No, ma'am."
"If she's attractive, why aren't you attracted to her?"
"Because I'm in love with you, ma'am."
"Excellent answer, sweetheart." She's gently squeezing my bare behind. "You're pretty warm back here...Does it smart, honey?"
"Christ, what do you think?" Her hand's abruptly removed. "Doubly disrespectful!" THWACK!! THWACK!! "To the Lord and me!" THWACK!! THWACK!! Those four strokes are searing hard. I'm yelping, my feet flying upward.
"Position broken!" THWACK!! THWACK!! "Twice!" THWACK!! THWACK!! "Try again."
"It smarts exceedingly, ma'am."
"That's wonderful. A husband's at his best when his bare bottom's blazing--right, darling?"
"Absolutely, ma'am." Then I'm currently sensational.
She exchanges the strap for the cane. "Let's discuss your ex-girlfriend Brittany now." The thin rattan taps my fiery-hot seat. "You loved her once?"
"Yes, ma'am."
"With your whole heart?"
"I thought so--"
"Evasive!" SWISH-SWAP!! SWISH-SWAP!! Sizzling strokes across my starkly-upthrust fanny's underside, my vision blurring. "Answer..."
"No, ma'am--not like I love you."
"So was it half-hearted love?"
"Let me think..."
"Hesitant!" SWISH-SWAP!! SWISH-SWAP!! Damn, like streaks of flame where my behind's so sensitive. "Well?"
"Extended infatuation, honey..."
"That long? Dishonesty!" SWISH-SWAP!! SWISH-SWAP!! "Plus disrespect!" SWISH-SWAP!! SWISH-SWAP!! My tears trickle. "Try again."
"I-I'm nuh-not certain, muh-uh-ma'am."
"Okay...But I can't speak for our visitor, who may want to discuss this subject further." "Vi-Visitor?" No, please...
Brittany's smiling smugly, waving her wooden racketball paddle. "Can I play too?"
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Dyke Grrl <dyke.grrl(at)verizon(dot)net>
Ahhh. The things that happen behind those innocent facades. I particularly like the way you conveyed the story primarily through dialogue.
Owen Williamson <ashthorn(at)maildulf(dot)com>
A well-told story, and it was interesting to see things from the point of view of the bottom. There was a wry smile at the end, but I had my doubts about the consent issues in this scene.
Kate <ecattiva(at)aol(dot)com>
Seems a very unfair scene to me, but if one finds such things erotic it is well-executed. The two-women-dominating-helpless-husband scenario seems a bit overused, but perhaps it is considered as much a classic in the F/M genre as the schoolgirl scenario is for M/f fans.