This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Adult
Tame That Hose!
By
Mara Maharakshasa <MaraMahaRakshasa@aol.com>
I'm amused by the sign at the garden center: 'Tame That Hose!' It's just a pricey spring-loaded reel gizmo for automatically coiling a garden hose, but it makes me recall my boyfriend, forever bulging in his jeans, wriggling uncomfortably whenever he sees attractive young girls in tight pants and bare midriffs, and generally a pest, bumping up against me whenever he's feeling horny.
It's time to take this advice.
"Okay," I tell him as he arrives at my apartment one evening.
"I have a present for you. Come on in, make yourself comfortable."
Like a guy, he thinks this means: Grab a beer from the fridge, switch channels to some sports program, and put his feet up on the couch.
"Not like that, you idiot," I tell him. "I mean, get your damned clothes off. What is it with guys and nuance?"
"Hey, I didn't go to nuance school. I only did mechanical engineering."
"Yeah? I'm going to show you some engineering tonight. Now, take them off, please?"
"We gonna get it on?" he asks hopefully.
"In a manner of speaking, yes, we are."
The beer is chugged, the TV clicks 'off.'
I return from the bedroom to find him sat at my PC, looking at some 'babes' site, his cock pointing at the ceiling fan.
"Do you always have to 'warm up'?" I ask. "Couldn't you let me have some input?"
"No offense. You were taking your time, so I thought I'd?]"
"Okay. Over here, you."
"What's that?" he asks suspiciously, seeing a small bag in my hand.
"We're going to try to get that cock of yours under control, that's what."
"Huh? Are you kidding? I like it just the way it is?]"
I pout. "Well, I don't. You remember our conversation, about how you're going to do as I say?"
"Well, kind of?]"
"Then remember harder. I'm going to put this thing on you, to stop you always getting a boner, every five minutes."
"Are you kidding!?" he gasps. "No way!"
"No chastity device, no nookie," I tell him firmly. "But do as you're told, and you get more exotic surprises than your bonehead friends have ever heard of."
He inclines his head.
"Really?"
His face is a treat, when I show him the stainless steel mesh bag. "You'd never get it in there," he boasts.
"Wanna bet? I've gonna squeeze your dick and your balls in here, baby. Then padlock so it stays that way."
There's alarm on his face. "No way!"
"Uh huh. Just let it sag, and we'll see."
It's a struggle, and he's quite a baby about it, but soon his cock is neatly coiled, and the chain mesh encloses his organs in a nice tight grip. I apply the tiny padlock, and pocket the key.
"Now, I'm going give your ass a good spanking," I smile.
"Jesus!" he gasps. "No! I'll burst out of this."
"Evidently not. Just get used to it, hmm? Now, bend over."
Yes, Tame That Hose!
The End
© Copyright by Mara Maharakshasa, 2002. All rights are reserved by the author. Do not retransmit, store (except for personal use) or publish without permission.
Reviews
Abrat4you <abrat4you(at)aol(dot)com>
The writing was good and creative, but I lost interest in the story long before the catch line. Perhaps, if it were just a bit shorter in the lead in...and more bite in the end...so to speak :)
Pablo Stubbs <Pablo.Stubbs(at)newsguy(dot)com>
There might be a story here for lovers of CBT, but spankos will be disappointed. It would be nice - albeit startling - if just for once a story by this author focused on spanking first, and then perhaps threw other kinks in as an afterthought. A little more subtlety in characterisation and dialogue would go a long way, too.
Needy Wench <needywench(at)hotmail(dot)com>
It's really a great story, and I again enjoyed this author's ability to twist the usual gender roles. I just wish it was more about spanking and less about other sexual diversions.
Anne <Ladyanne60(at)aol(dot)com>
It's amazing what this narrator has learned from a simple garden store, correlating a garden tool with her boyfriend's lustful desires. This was the perfect title to an excellent story where the woman is in full control. The author shows such vivid imagination with this one!