This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Adult
Due to the public spanking, I considered labeling this Not my kink, but except for the audience, this story is very much my kink -- belt, punishment, nice guy who doesn't really wish to hurt me, just wants me to behave... ;-)
Mike promised «Anyone who wants to use me in a story, can!!!! Fame at last!» which is a good thing, 'cause I started this a long time ago when he mentioned going to Target and buying a belt. «I looked in Gucci, browsed in Georgio Armani and bought one in Target. There I was, standing in the queue holding my belt, (which incidentally, I was holding doubled). Standing in front of me was a thirty something lady in tight blue jeans and a very cute bottom.» If that's not inspiration, I don't know what is!
Right on Target
By
"And Mabel, I would not have believed it if I hadn't seen it with my own eyes. My Harley and I were waiting in the queue in the Target store, several ahead of us, including that little red-haired American girl who's been over here for the past few weeks stirring up trouble all over town. And just behind her was that nice young Mike Hitchen, only had one thing to purchase, a new black leather belt.
"And that bratty little Pandora -- the American girl -- was making all sorts of fuss, arguing about everything with the poor clerk, Millie Havener, and my Harley says, 'Wants her bum smacked, that one does.' And just then, the girl leans over the counter and lunges at Millie and snatches the sweater out of the poor girl's hands and says, 'Well, if you can't ring it up right, then forget it. I won't buy it. You can't get *anything* right!' Poor Millie was almost in tears by that time.
"Apparently Mr. Mike had seen enough, too, because all of a sudden, he doubled that belt and raised it up and brought it right down across her backside, right where she needed it, if you ask me. Well, she stood up straight in a hurry! Turned to him in a fit, screaming, 'What the hell do you think you're...' but before she could say any more, he bent her back over the counter, grabbed her hands behind her, flipped up that short little skirt -- didn't have far to go, either -- pulled those skimpy, see-through lace panties down to her knees, and put that belt to real good use. By the time he finished, her backside was redder than her hair, she was howling and saying how sorry she was and how good she'd be from now on, and everybody around was applauding him, my Harley most of all. In fact, he was applauding so hard that he was almost gasping for breath, and he was so pleased at seeing justice done that later, he. Well, never mind about that.
"The shop manager told Mike no charge for the belt, seeing how it was used now, anyway. And when we left, he -- Mike, not the shop manager -- had her standing in a corner, still sobbing, desperate to rub, I'm sure, but he wouldn't allow it, and he was lecturing her, telling her how she was going to behave for the rest of her holiday here, and her agreeing to everything, even so far as promising to enroll in his 'New Perspectives' Internet attitude-adjustment course.
"And I swear it all happened just like that! Would you like some more tea, Mabel?"
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Sarah Nada <circler73(at)hotmail(dot)com>
"Right on Target" is equal parts silly and hot. In it, a character who resembles the author (right down to her name) receives a well deserved spanking from someone else a lot of us know. She comes away with a new perspective. The gossipy narrative style works perfectly, as does the last line.
Dyke Grrl <dyke.grrl(at)verizon(dot)net>
love the gossipy reporting of this. The story is fun by itself, but the way it's reported makes it perfect.
Frank <sswitcher(at)yahoo(dot)com>
A fun story, and I bet that "nice young Mike Hitchen" is quite pleased to be featured in it in this way :) Having the action recounted in dialog by the purely fictional narrator (who clearly appreciates a good spanking when she sees one) was very effective. The only thing that worries me is, would there be enough room to properly swing a belt in the cramped confines of the checkout aisle?
Alex Birch <alexbirch(at)blueyonder(dot)co(dot)uk>
A nice sort of jokey little piece using a device I don't much care for and thats the involvement of ng characters. It all seems just too self indulgent and rib tickling for my liking and avoids having to think of a really novel idea. OK as far as it goes but doesnt linger in the memory.