This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Adult
On your mark, Get set....
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"Who's brilliant idea was it to defrost the steaks on the grill, anyway? Bark has more juice," Bob crabbed, scraping charcoal crumbles off liver-colored yuck.
"TOLD you we should've ordered Chinese," Carol hissed, stabbing her slab viciously.
"You can't have a goddamn GRILL takeout. What are you stupid!"
"Want soy sauce," Ted offered lamely.
"Sauce your ass, Ted," Alice snapped, glaring at pickled beets bleeding obscenely into the potato salad.
Bob stood up abruptly. "I'm ALL for saucing some bottom round to spice up this shindig."
"Oh yahhh! Nice rare brisket. Plump 'n flaming hot," Ted chimed, smacking his palm with a sweeping spank.
"Waddayasay, buddy boy? First one to broil the buns....."
"Buns, hell! Let's roast some rump and the beer's on me!"
Alice and Carol were already edging off their seats when Bob proposed they make it a race.
"Give 'em 30 seconds head-start."
"You're all sport, pal."
"Betcha a ten spot, Carol's over my knee, rucked, bared and squalling like a branded calf, before you even corral yours!"
"Twenty says my Alice kicks her bottoms into the brush before Carol's half lit!"
"My hand's bigger than your hand!"
"Ha! Mine's got a smaller caboose!"
"Carol's ass'll glow like a sunset."
"You ain't heard bawling, 'til you've heard Alice spanked."
"Fifty bucks says mine will *want* me when I'm done."
"A hundred says mine *blows* me!"
"Two fins say you idiots wind up flat on your face," Carol shrieked as she pushed out of her chair running, Alice close at her heels.
On your MARK ...
Get SET ...
LET'S BARBECUE ASSSSSSSSS!!
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
John <johnb(at)ssec(dot)wisc(dot)edu>
These couples sound like a lot of fun. But what a waste to have to turn a perfectly good steak into shoe leather first. I suggest the guys spank the girls soundly, and then take them out to dinner. Seems only fair.
Margaret <wessyLA(at)aol(dot)com>
This was a fun read. It left me wanting to know more about the dynamics of the couples involved. How did they all find out they used domestic discipline? Is it always M/f or do the girls get a chance too? Thanks for sending this along.
Sarah Nada <circler73(at)hotmail(dot)com>
This story has a breezy, summery feel to it, and is written almost entirely in dialogue. Very playful and funny, with a very memorable last line.
Owen Williamson <ashthorn(at)maildulf(dot)com>
Some of these stories you really want them to continue. Not so with this one. It says everything that needs to be said and my imagination can fill in the rest with no problems.