This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Adult
Getting What She Came For
By
Albert Terego <albertterego@yahoo.com>
The gentleness in his voice made her furious.
"If you're not going to hurt me, leave me the fuck alone." But she didn't actually say it.
She didn't want to be cuddled, coddled and spanked like a little girl. Not this time. And certainly not by him. She wanted a beating. Hadn't she made that clear?
This was not a good start. He looked and acted OK -- no supermodel topman, that was for sure, but she didn't really like that anyway. Five minutes ago something about him had made her pretty sure that he could do what she needed done. Where did this Mr. Sensitive crap come from all of a sudden? She could still back out, but why bother. It would be easier to just get it over with.
...
He had to help her get back up after her he was finished with her. She was sore even in places he hadn't touched. She glared at him as soon as she could see straight again, trying to hide the hungry look on her face.
She offered no real resistance when he hugged her -- actually, she'd probably have let him do just about anything he wanted with her at that point. She felt a pang of regret when she remembered what she had come for.
"Please, just take your hands off me."
"Are you OK?" But he knew the answer already.
"You hurt me. I needed it, but I also hate you for it. Just go."
He just nodded, a half smile, and melted away into the crowd. She got exactly what she came for.
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Frank <sswitcher(at)yahoo(dot)com>
A lady who knows what she wants, is not afraid to ask for it, and is lucky enough to get it! But I think perhaps the story loses something by being told entirely from the point of view of the bottom. I want to know a bit more about this mysterious top who melts away into the crowd. What is he thinking? What makes him tick? A paragraph or three about that would greatly enhance an already very interesting piece.
Anne <Ladyanne60(at)aol(dot)com>
Be careful what you wish for, you just might get it! The attributes of both characters made this a very believable story. This was well written, her thoughts sometimes a little confusing, like in real life.
Simon <srb(at)imrryr(dot)demon(dot)co(dot)uk>
An interesting look at the way that different people have different kinks. I found the character of the woman both interesting and credible. Her fierce desire for a specific style of spanking, and her contempt for the man who tries to make it something else, were both well described. The way in which she is clearly just using him to get what she wants was particularly interesting. A fascinating character in an original story.
Tami <tamishy(at)webtv(dot)net>
Brings an interesting question about: Which is worse getting what you want or always wanting it. Somehow even if we get what we want it's to what we thought it would be like. Enough Philosophy!
This story had a bit of regret set into it. I just felt sorry for her. I hope that's what the writer had it mind.