This short story is an entry in the 2001 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission.  Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice.  The author would appreciate your comments

Category:  Adult/Song Parody.  This is based on You Are My Sunshine, written by Jimmie Davis & Charles Mitchell, from the film O Brother, Where Art Thou, by Joel Coen & Ethan Coen
 

You Are My Daddy

By

Louiza <louiza@home.com>

The other night, dear, as I lay sleeping
I dreamed you held me o'er your knee
But when I woke, dear, I was mistaken
And I hung my head and I cried

You are my Daddy, my only Daddy
You make me happy when skies are gray
You'll never know, dear, how much I need it
Please do spank my bottom today

I'll always serve you and make you happy
If you will only be my dom
But if you don't, dear, I'll be too bratty
You'll regret it all someday

You are my Daddy, my only Daddy
You make me happy when skies are gray
You'll never know, dear, how much I love you
Please do spank my bottom today

You told me once, dear, I must obey you
I did vow to with all my heart
But I am just a wayward woman-child
I need my Daddy to make me behave

You are my Daddy, my only Daddy
It makes me happy when you spank me
You'll never know, dear, how much I love it
Please do spank me over your knee

In all my dreams, dear, you seem to scold me
When I awake my poor heart pines
So won't you paddle me and make us happy
I'll beg forgiveness, I'll take all the blame

You are my Daddy, my only Daddy
It makes me happy when you spank me
You'll never know, dear, how much I love it
Please do spank me over your knee

The End

© Copyright by Louiza, (louiza@spankingfiles.com) Summer, 2001. All Rights Reserved. You have my permission to save and print one copy of this song parody for your own personal use. Please do not reproduce or distribute this song parody in any manner, except as stated, without my express written permission.

Reviews

Alex Birch  <alexbirch(at)blueyonder(dot)co(dot)uk>
The author definitely has a penchant for these song parodies and I have enjoyed them in previous competitions.  I have to say I dont think this one 'scanned' quite as well as others but a good effort nonetheless.

Haron  <aster(at)mail(dot)i(dot)com(dot)ua>
This is a very clever song parody. It preserves the features of the original songs, just like a parody should, but its content is original and expressed well enough to make a heart of a Daddy melt. It could be a great verse to put on spanko greeting cards for all those Daddies.

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