This short story is an entry in the 2001 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
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Spring Vacation
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FOREWORD: The year is 1972. While the rest of her family is going to Disneyworld, thirteen year old Tami Macey has been sentenced to spend her spring vacation on her grandparent's farm.
Her father left stern instructions with his parents to make sure Tami was taken to the woodshed everynight.
"That girl needs an attitude adjustment". He explained. "Her grades are bad, she's disrespectful and last week the department store caught her shoplifting." He continued. "Her mother and I really didn't want to exclude her from this trip, but she left us no choice." He looked at his daughter with a disgusted scowl. "And if she gives you any trouble, just give her one of your famous brandings, Dad."
Tami recalled her father speak of such a thing. Granddad would take him to the shed, strip him, and would proceed to beat him throughly with a heated strap. The after-effects left dark red horizontal marks for weeks to come.
Only her sister, Lisa, gave a sympathetic look before the family left. Tami's grandparents proceeded to give her the agenda of the week.
"4 am the alarm clock goes off. You'll begin your day by feeding the animals and cleaning up after them". Her granddad explained.
"After breakfast, it's out to the fields. The crops and garden need to be tended to, and the manure needs to be plowed." He grinned knowing she would hate that.
"After lunch you'll be helping your grandma out. And don't give her any lip girly, or I won't wait until after supper to take you out back." He threatened.
"You'll be spending your nights studying before our trip to the wood shed. Then you'll be standing with your bare backside facing the fireplace before going to bed." He concluded.
And that's pretty much how Tami's week went. Besides her nightly visit to the woodshed, she gave him no other reason to punish her. She even managed to stay away from the dreaded branding. So it concerned her greatly when grandad wanted to speak to her after the Friday night session.
"Grandma and I believe you've been punished enough. We've no complaints about your behavior this past week. And we feel kinda bad that you didn't get to go on the trip. So as a treat you can go to the dance tomorrow night." He smiled.
It was at the dance that Tami met Keith. A blond haired, blue eyed sixteen year old boy who took a liking to her. They spent the night dancing and talking and giggling. She felt so comfortable with Keith she even told him about her horrible week. So on the walk home, Keith decided to give her a good moment to remember. Standing on her grandparents porch, Tami received her first kiss.
Sunday afternoon her parents came to pick her up. And as Tami's grandfather informed his son about her behaviour improvement, Tami and Lisa were talking on the porch.
"So how was Florida, Lisa?" Tami asked.
"Terrible, it rained the entire time." Lisa answered. " But, I guess it couldn't have been worse than the week you had."
Tami just smiled and said "You'd think, wouldn't you."
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2001
Reviews
Frank <sswitcher(at)yahoo(dot)com>
One of my all-time favourite kinds of fantasy! A teenage girl in deep trouble, and severely punished for it. In this case, a whole week of pure, unadulterated punishment. Just the thought of it is a serious turn-on for me, particularly when I imagine myself in the girl's position. To think up that thing with the heated strap, the author must have an exceptionally sadistic streak. (In case it's not clear, that comment is intended as high praise indeed.) Finally, thanks to the nice little twist at the end, we are left not feeling so bad for young Tami after all.
Mija <mijita(at)newsguy(dot)com>
Great story for those of us who like the too-strict punishment genre. Plenty of severe old-fashioned discipline, balanced with justice and mercy when Tami's behavior improved. The story was vivid, and seemed longer than it was. The ending was a nice touch.