This short story is an entry in the 2001 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Adult, Parody of Kansas City by Wilbert Harrison
Kansas City
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I'm going to Kansas City, Kansas City here I come
I'm gonna be standin' in the corner
Well, I might take a plane
Instrumental Break Well, if I see him with that woman
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The End
© Copyright Louiza, Summer, 2001
Reviews
Naomi Darvell <naomi_darvell(at)hotmail(dot)com>
Great parody! It's faithful, but it actually adds one further bluesy dimension to the original.
I don't usually find things in verse very sexy, but the way Louiza rings the changes on spankin'/lovin' is pretty damn hot.
Mary Catherine <marycatherine(at)saintfrancis-sfg(dot)net>
I had to go back and look at and listen to the original song, because it had been a long time since I'd last heard it and I wasn't all that familiar with the lyrics, except for the first verse. Parody is very difficult in general. In this case, I feel that there isn't enough variation between the parody and the original song from which it was derived. There were some nice ideas, but they weren't fully fleshed out in order to truly make this a parody.