This short story is an entry in the 2001 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission.  Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice.  The author would appreciate your comments

Category:  Adult
 

Healing

By

Lil Imp <imp_all_day@hotmail.com>

Quiet contemplation where two walls meet
Head up, eyes forward, hands at side, unmoving
A bottom bare, red and hot
Evidence of consequences paid

Thoughts, remorse, a heavy heart
Head bows, eyes close
Tears once again flow
Shoulders shaking

A quiet sigh, footsteps approach
A once hard hand, now a gentle touch
Warm embrace, soothing words
Healing has begun.

The End

© Copyright Summer, 2001

Reviews

Needy Wench  <needywench(at)hotmail(dot)com>
I love the way this is written, so much about the emotions and feelings behind a spanking, without ever using the word!  My favorite line was «A once hard hand, now a gentle touch» -- shows the love in spite of the punishment.

Jodi  <ladiejj(at)webtv(dot)net>
I feel the author did a good job of establishing what has happened and what is going on using very few words. This poem uses a lot of actions to describe feeling and thoughts. This poem has a nice style and flows easily.

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