This short story is an entry in the 2001 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Child, edgy
Good Intentions
By
"Aargh" comes the high pitched cry as the nine-thronged lash lands again on the upturned buttocks.
A three second wait, whip hand poised to strike again, then again the slender target.
Already the child's thighs and posterior are marked back and forth with a myriad of angry red weals.
The child screams in protest, but the punishment must continue. The hunger must be satisfied, both mine and society's. Justice must be dealt with a heavy and impassionate hand.
A red line appears on her right hip -- broken skin. She is beyond notice, and continues to scream and vainly fight her restraints.
Eventually it ends. The girl is to weak from struggle to respond.
I release her hands and legs, and cradle her head against my shoulder. "Don't worry about a thing, it's all over! I only did that because I love you, and naughty little Penititas who rape Kindern need to be taught proper behavior so they can be re-integrated into society. Now come, let me rub some nano-lotion onto that for you."
The End
Author's Note: I once thought that Lurking Dragon created the Rejuve universe as a place where everything can be right, and all your wildest dreams can be true. The more I read, the more I realized that the apparent utopia was only a surface. Even the 28th century still must deal with abuse, greed, and lust -- they've only been buried deeper. Anyway, let me know what you think of this little thought experiment. RCG
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Reviews
Sarah Nada <circler73(at)hotmail(dot)com>
Given my complete ignorance of the rejuve universe, I thought I might have trouble reviewing "Good Intentions." Fortunately, the story works as a freestanding vignette... It's quite dark, and the imagery is vivid enough to make me flinch. I would definitely be interested in reading more about these characters.