This short story is an entry in the 2001 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Edge; CAUTION: A bit racy.
I wish I could say that this came solely from my imagination, but I had a little help. If you like this story please let me know. I'd really like to see if anyone else mind works quite like mine.
Good Idea
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"Honey, I quit my job today," He exclaims walking in the door.
"You did what!" She cries out.
"Yeah, I quit my job, so I can stay home and take care of you. I've decided that you are in need of a full time disciplinarian. From the minute you wake up in the morning, and I'm going to spank your naughty backside. Then while you're making breakfast I'll give you a good dose of the spatula. Right before you go to work I'm going to cane you so hard you won't be sitting all day. And the second you come home, it's back over my knee you go. All night long till you go to bed you'll be due. Hell, I might even come to work at lunch time and take you to a empty parking lot for a little noon 'pick-me-up'." He threatens.
"And since I won't be working, you'll have to put in lots of overtime. And don't think I am going to let you out of your daily household chores. Oh, no dear, I expect the house clean at all times. And I'm sure I can find something not done to my standards." He says with a wicked look in his eyes.
"I am going to have you so trained that when I unbuckle my belt, you immediately strip to nothing. If I take it out of the loops you bend over grab your ankles and hang on for dear life. And if I unzip my trousers you get on your knees and go for gusto. After I'm done you will stand in the corner until I get my strength back. Then I will take you over my knee and punish you severely for making me climax too fast, for moving too slow, or for not giving your best effort. Anything that I can think of just to get myself worked up again. Then I will have your properly punished ass. Over and over again."
'It's too much, I can't hold it any longer.' she thinks.
And off goes the water.
"Oh, that was a good one," she whispers out of breath. Gathering all her strength she lifts out of the tub
"Thank you Bill, for putting a hose on the faucet." She says grinning widely.
With closed eyes her last thought, 'Best idea he ever had.'
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2001
Reviews
Michele <mcasson(at)telus(dot)com>
There's a sly, black humour in "Good Idea" that had me giggling. Mostly it's the sheer volume of detail in the fantasy that makes the story so funny. As the husband in the story outlines his plans, the reader gets the impression of a spanking fantasy run amok. I couldn't help thinking of the truism, be careful what you wish for. The ending of the story was an unexpected and hilarious surprise. Well done.
Needy Wench <needywench(at)hotmail(dot)com>
I'm afraid my mind doesn't work the way yours does, because I missed something important here. I don't understand the connection between the faucet and the other good ideas. Is there some way you could make this more straight forward?