This short story is an entry in the 2001 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Adult
Fidelity Check
By
"Gateway Fidelity Life, how may I direct your call? Thank you, Mrs. Thomas, one moment please.... Shit, that's her eighth fucking call this morning!"
"Mary! That's not like you! Please step into my office." **** "I'm sorry, Aunt Sharon. It won't happen again."
"Oh, I'm sure it won't. But what's gotten into you the last couple of days?"
"Nothing. It's nothing, really."
"Don't give me that crap, young lady. Look at me. What's going on?"
"It's... it's John. I think he's... he's...."
"You think he's what?"
"I th-think he's spanking another woman!"
"No! I don't believe it. Not John. You must be mistaken, Dear."
"No, I'm not, Aunt Sharon. Last week, I forgot to take the chops out of the f-freezer before I left for work. When he got home, John just gave me a kiss, and said we'd have some s-soup and leftovers. And, and on Friday, I forgot to pick up the dry cleaning. John t-told me not to worry about it. He s-said that he would pick it up on Saturday on his way to the b-barber. See!"
"Blow your nose, Dear. Really, Mary, those are hardly capital offenses."
"B-but last summer, if I didn't do the chores, or I was l-late for work, it meant a bare bottom smacking before dinner. A second violation within three days meant at least twenty-five smacks with a hairbrush before bed. And three times in a week m-meant a caning on Friday night! He doesn't care anymore!"
"Shh, Little One. Think for minute. Last summer, you were a wreck. You were drinking, and lazy, and self-destructive. But with John's help, for the last several months, you've been on time every day. You've stopped drinking, and lost some weight. You're taking much better care of yourself. I'm proud of you. You've earned a little leeway."
"B-but what if he really doesn't care anymore?"
"Oh, that's simple enough to check. How do you go home at night?"
"I take Melton to the Interstate."
"After work, stop for a drink, then take the Parkway. It's the end of the month. There's bound to be a speed trap or two." **** "Morning, Aunt Sharon!"
"There's my Mary Sunshine. Oh, I see you've got it. I wondered what happened to the pillow from Gramma's settee."
The End
© Copyright May, 30, 2001
Reviews
Julie Moon <Msmusic4(at)won(dot)com>
Fidelity Check" is great for originality. It takes the classic woman's fear of being no longer desirable to her lover and puts it in the mode of spanking. "Has he found someone else to love/spank? The conversation between "Mary" and her aunt was an excellent way of telling the story, I felt like I was in the room listening to them. The story leaves a great deal to the imagination and to be imagined. A definate turn on.
Mary Catherine <marycatherine(at)saintfrancis-sfg(dot)net>
I really enjoyed the underlying humor in BCC's story. Where the conversation went was definitely a surprise, as I definitely expected a F/F scene based on the setup. It was a bit confusing IMO to start the story off with the insurance agency, then dropping it. I don't think the location added to the story, but it did make me wonder why and how it fit with everything else.