This short story is an entry in the 2001 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Edge
A 100 word quickly for my first SSC-2001 entry. Why this story is edgy is very clear and I will note that Rule #8 permits, nay, encourages, this sort of creative thinking.
Edge
By
Y Lee Coyote <YLeeCoyote@juno.com>
Pat loved going to the high meadow. It always was so much fun. Pat was running after the ball when there was the parental bellowing to stop. "STOP, PAT, STOP!!"
It was just seconds later that Sam grabbed Pat and sat on the thick clover. Pat's shorts and underwear came down and Pat was quickly over the parental lap getting spanked.
SPANK!! SPANK!! SPANK!! SPANK!! SPANK!!
"How many times have I told you!"
SPANK!! SPANK!! SPANK!! SPANK!! SPANK!!
Pat was howling.
"When will you learn not to go near the cliff edge?"
The End
© Copyright A.I.L. May 28, 2001
See my stories at: http://www.asstr-mirror.org/files/Authors/YLeeCoyote/www/
Reviews
Naomi Darvell <naomi_darvell(at)hotmail(dot)com>
Y. Lee kicked the contest off -- if it wasn't the first official entry of the summer, it was close-- with a very short short! Despite our minimalist categories, he found an even more minimalist way to play with them.
I especially liked the way he imitated a childrens'-book style.
Simon <srb(at)srb@imrryr(dot)demon(dot)co(dot)uk>
A very evocative piece, particularly given its brevity. A simple scenario is very well conveyed, and the twist in the last line changes your perception of the whole situation.