This short story is an entry in the 2001 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Adult
This is the kind of story i would write at night... while sleeping or dreaming or simply thinking... This is the way my mind *works* at night... lol And this is the last night of loneliness in Bucarest?! Understand what u want ! ;) (Besides, it's the first time i am writing for SSC, so have patience with me please :) )
Drifting...in Dreams?
By
SparkleKitty <sparkle_kitty21@hotmail.com>
My mind... twisting... tired of being away from you... playing...drifting... what do i want?... Try to sleep...
Oof! Too hot! - Shifting my body, turning on the right side...closing my eyes - : "No please! I'm sorry! It's the last time... I promise! Pleaaaseee!" I can feel the burning licks on my skin.
My hand slides under the pillow, my foot out of the bed. Now it's cold...good... - trying to fall asleep again: "I never break my promises... You need to be punished". Slowly my bum rises.
Ding dang dong... the church clock shows 3am. - Have you read my email? Why haven't you called? -
"See this hairbrush? I'm gonna use it on your naughty behind, little baby..." I'm gasping for air, my legs kick in the matress.
I can't stand this anymore. Waking up I turn the tv on. What if the cab will be late? What if I feel sick on the plane? Does that matter? Umm... no... it really doesn't!
OOF! There's nothing nice on Tv! Try discovery channel! - The last thing I would discover now would be that he didn't like my email and that he was very upset. I just HOPE he won't spank me for that. - Shivers going though my body... down my spine.- I hope he won't spank me... won't spank me...
-Trying to fall asleep again... - The bus is passing by. Damn! Already 5? Belt, hairbrush? Which one? Corner time? One D in a group of A's is no big deal! And it wasn't my fault! Try to get that!
I am crazy... talking to myself! Why don't you try to convince him about the D if u are so brave, miss SmartyPants? You will get it!
"No listen... it wasn't my fault... i didn't know they would care about my skipped classes... pleaaseeee..." - He won't spank you! You know him better than that! That's so absurd i mean! -
STOP DREAMING and go to sleep you sicko! You perv! You'd like him to whack you good, huh? Admit it!
"I can't take it anymore!!! please... it hurts"-Tears gathering in my eyes.- Yes... i know he will spank me. I know he didn't write to me on purpose. He always keeps his promises. He's playing me... I know he is!
I can't stand this. Enough!! - Turning the computer on, connecting to internet... - Gonna check my email. I need to! - My heart is pounding against my ribs, my stomach is so empty... -
One new mail... oh, it's from you!!!
"Hey love! *kiss kiss*
Hope you had a GOOD sleep. Don't miss your plane... and don't forget to bring YOUR hairbrush, baby girl!
Love you!"
*dry mouth*
8 hours later:
"NO PLEASE! I DIDN'T WANT TO MISS THAT CLASS! I SWEAR! DON'T SPANK ME!" *whack whack!*
...wake up!
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2001
Reviews
Mary Catherine <marycatherine(at)saintfrancis-sfg(dot)net>
I liked how part of SparkleKitty's dream seemed to be a premonition, which tied the ending of the story together very neatly. Overall though, this piece seemed a bit disjointed to me. Just as I started to get into one scene, it switched to a new sleep cycle. For me, it would've worked better to stay on one dream all the way through, instead of skipping back and forth.
Needy Wench <needywench(at)hotmail(dot)com>
It was kind of hard for me to follow the train of thought in this one, but I think that's why I liked it. My own nights are so like this, waking up in the morning, trying to remember what is real, what's dreamed, what part is online fiction and what part is reality. You did a good job of capturing that fragmented feeling!