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My fiction is publicly available on web sites that allow readers to post public comments about what they have read. These comments are an indication of the views of ordinary readers. In the interests of shameless and blatant self-promotion, I reproduce here those comments that have been complimentary. These comments are already publicly available.
Degrees of Intimacy |
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Fascinating I’ve read all four parts and I am intrigued by your story. Very believable characters, strong sense of place, atmosphere and a feeling of reality. You make your characters come to life vividly and emphatically. Each of them are worthy of further investigations. I hope you will grant us so. Meanwhile I’m looking forward to the next four degrees of this intimacy. |
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Brilliant writing in a story so engrossing I wanted more. I enjoyed feeling like I was there in all those different exotic countries and settings. The characters are each unique, well developed, and interesting. The relationships and the sex scenes were very satisfying. I would pay for a novella like this, but it was free. I will look for more from this excellent writer. |
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Devotion to Aphrodite |
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A Hot Story! Wow! That’s all I can say. Historical lesbian fiction? Hot!!! I liked the development of the story and how realistic you made it seem. Very nice!!! |
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Good for you. Good for you. At first I thought you were going to end it with Diana converting to Christianity. Thank goodness you didn’t. It was a hot story and a sad tale. Thank you for presenting the Gods with compassion, especially the fair Aphrodite.
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bintarab
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Riveting story Very elegant writing! Your characters are fully fleshed-out despite (I think) the difficulty in keeping them from seeming like caricatures, or otherwise 2-D characters. One of the things that makes this story so smooth is that you were very faithful to Diana's POV, and I experienced it all through her. Good job! The mood and atmosphere you created were perfectly matched to the story, and all the erotic parts were very much an organic outgrowth of it, not gratuitously stuck in there. Thank you for submitting this! |
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What an interesting, and in many ways, perplexing story. I am not sure exactly how I feel about what you have written, but I admire the way you have handled this meeting of the old and the new religion which would so soon go on to conquer the western world, carried by ordinary people to the furthest extremes of the Roman Empire. You also caught the very essence of Christianity, with its message of new life for ordinary people. |
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Dinner is Served |
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An
excellent piece of erotica. The characters were varied and well
described. The group scene was left hanging but the imagination filled
the gaps in! And as an IT geek myself I'm made up that Nigel was the
star of the show (although some may debate that). Maybe he'll think it
over and come to the next party; I'd like to read that story. . |
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Well written and fully developed. Poor Nigel. I wonder if he was going home to his mother? Looking forward to reading more. . |
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Disgust |
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literary and eroticI liked the cynicism cellophane wrapped around the sex. Has all the right touches and was a rewarding, quality read |
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Well-written, but thoroughly unpleasant.I found that I could not take viewing the world through the main character's eyes, and bailed at the end of the concert. |
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Divine Love |
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Very nice I loved the story so far, please continue and let us watch what you so wonderfully have described in this first chapter. |
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Sandy2Moon |
Wow, what
a struggle and a release. Good emotional and interior drama.
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Door-to-Door Prostitution |
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That was something! I'm just not sure what! Well written and entertaining, this story also had a little moral. This was clever and different. |
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Very nice Well-written and fun to read. Now, I wait for the comments about the husband that are usually reserved for the wife in this story. |
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Very well done I think Jenny should get the same treatment from Cherry that the dumb sod is getting but cut him off from Cherry.
It isn’t right that the husband belittle the wife like he does just because she can’t produce children doesn’t give him the right to drag a hooker into the house right in front of his wife. |
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Doubly Endowed |
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For a change, here’s an illustration I created for Bradley Stoke. The pic is for a short story called “Doubly Endowed“, the subject matter of which will be obvious (hopefully) from the pic! I heartily recommend his website, where you’ll find the finished, colour version of this illustration (Doubly Endowed can be found in the short stories section, page five). |
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Excess |
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gilrenard
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Good
sexy story. I like your style of writing. You should check out the
group RockBitch..they're nasty on stage.
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Extracurricular Love |
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Bradley Stoke has set up a wonderful scene by omitting rationalization or embarrassment. It’s the matter-of-factness that makes this rather fantastical setting come off as perfectly normal. It’s a college. A college devoted to sexual studies. (I think I might want to enrol!) It’s intelligently written with subtleties that glide the reader right along.
Very interesting premise with a nice story to go along with it.
I really enjoyed it! I think many of you might as well!
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