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My fiction is publicly available on web sites that allow readers to post public comments about what they have read. These comments are an indication of the views of ordinary readers. In the interests of shameless and blatant self-promotion, I reproduce here those comments that have been complimentary. These comments are already publicly available.
Amity’s Vow |
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Loved it!
You should be a LARPer, or at least write the backgrounds for those that do. I love your style, and the great images!
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Big Game |
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Anonymous
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wonderful story
Wonderful story. I really enjoyed it. Excellent discription of how various cultures can view things differently. Well done. |
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Blessed by Nature |
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Very well executed, as usual, Bradley. I enjoyed the parallel universe setting. |
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8archer8
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Quite an interesting story.
This story had me wondering, confused, and asking if you knew where you were when you wrote this. Everything seemed to be a reality, but all in different time periods. Satellite television, slaves, excellent use of words when speaking... However, after a bit more reading, the fictional story line dawned upon me. Very interesting story. Very good writing. |
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Tentativeness
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Oh dear.
I was quite confused as well. You talked about it being the twentieth century and then went on about America's state of independence, or rather, its lack thereof and pornography on television. It was a lot to take in, politically and socially but I do believe I enjoyed it. I vouch for Nicholas, though. He seems to have more spirit, more zest in him than the Yves fellow. And the protagonist should be taken down from her high horse All in all, I'd say it’s a story well-written! |
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ShyEric
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Extraordinary.
A remarkable piece of writing bringing together colonial--post colonial history with erotica. Very interesting story line and conclusion. The gardener’s tools seem to bring Hedonists down to earth---even in “Eden.” Suggests the garden and the snake. |
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Bukkake Business |
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Unusual & provocative Bradley, you did an excellent job here. The story is so unusual, I found myself having to read on to find out where it might go. It is like a meandering forest path, slowly revealing delightful spots along the way.
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Chums of the Ring |
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Omygod! That was really, really brilliant. Hilarious!
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A Hot Story!!! I am a gal who loves stories about the lives and loves of gay and bisexual men! I love this story! It’s hot!!!!!!!!!
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Anonymous
in Phoenix
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Hilarious as well as intriguing!
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Cottage Life |
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Anonymous
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Utterly hilarious! Brilliant satire, and very well written.
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Creamfields |
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P. I. Rockwell
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It was Umbra’s illustration of Creamfields (written by Bradley Stoke) that first made me sit up and say “Wow!” Not only is the picture beautiful in its own right, but it also is Stoke’s piece. The light, the movement, the atmosphere, the chaos and sexiness of the setting—it is a perfect companion to the text. I love Umbra’s women. You can’t help but like the sex appeal of the dancer in Creamfields.
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Crystal Passion |
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While
light on sex, this story is very emotionally evocative. There
imagery presented by Bradley Stoke's writing is amazing. You can feel
the
narrator's emotions through everything. While the ending is quite
tragic, this
is by far one of the best stories I have read on this site.
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Cyberwhore |
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Gilaine
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Wonderfully written... I
do not normally read sci-fi erotic stories, and I have no idea why I
picked this one, but I am so glad that I did. The clarity of the
writing and the depth of the main character and what he goes through is
amazing. |
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What the last guy said I don’t read the sci-fi stuff, but this one is excellent. I didn’t get a rise out of it, mind you, but it was such a good story. Anyway, this was excellent. I’d love to see more of your writing, regardless of its genre. |