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"Lisa's Breakfast" by Ben Fischer (dad fucks stepdaughter) 4, 4, 4
"Lisa's Breakfast" by Ben Fischer (biffo@earthlink.net). This was listed in the postings as "A Brand new Story by me. Feedback welcome." Ben Farmer has been a widower and a good father to 16-year-old Lisa for nine years. Actually, Ben is Lisa's stepfather, and so it will be OK for him to fuck the hell out of the little girl. And Lisa, while still technically a virgin, has become a veteran at giving blowjobs to the guys at school; and so she's really pleased deep down inside when Ben humps her, in spite of her protestations of pain. And Ben has a foot-long love python between his legs. Twelve inches unaroused. My feedback is that the next time the author should write a better story, one that incorporates physical and psychological realism, and have someone proofread it for him. Ratings for "Lisa's Breakfast" Athena (technical quality): 4 Venus (plot & character): 4 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 4 |