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"Distractions" by Vickie Morgan (exhibitionism) 9, 10, 10 http://www.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=386878337 --- http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14929.txt "Distractions" by Vickie Morgan (artemis55@hotmail.com). http://www.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=386878337 --- http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14929.txt The story starts with a vague description of some sort of bet. Apparently the woman is supposed to do whatever she can to get a rise out of her lover without actually touching him. She does her duty, and in the process she mentally retraces some of her earlier adventures with him. I really can't tell you much more, can I? I'll just add that there's an interesting twist at the end. The only thing wrong with the story is that it needs a few more commas. Their absence was distracting, but that may have something to do with the title of this story. Ratings for "Distractions" Athena (technical quality): 9 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10