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* "Paint" by Mary Anne Mohanraj (old boyfriend) 10, 10, 10
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* "Paint" by Mary Anne Mohanraj (moh2@midway.uchicago.edu). When a favorite
author writes a very short story like "Morningsong," I am inclined to declare
a bonus week and do a second story. So here goes.

A young woman is helping her best friend paint an apartment. Her former
boyfriend, who is now dating the best friend, is helping too. It is a
sweltering hot day. When the best friend goes out for more paint, the other
two go for an unscheduled quickie.

Ratings for "Paint"
Athena (technical quality): 10
Venus (plot & character): 10
Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10