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* "Innocent Days" by James Medley (menage a trois) 10
* "Innocent Days" by James Medley. I've always admired faithful military wives, and so I was surprised that I so much enjoyed this tale of a wife playing around while her husband was away in Vietnam. I think there were three things that made me enjoy the story: (1) The narrator presented the story as if the protagonist's action were the most natural thing in the world. (2) The metaphors were excellent. (3) The description was extremely vivid. Or maybe it's simply that the author is a just plain good writer. The action takes place in a pecan grove in Mississippi and in the nearby trailer park. And Judy makes a great pecan pie that tastes great if you eat it naked right after three-way sex. (Rating: 10) |