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"November Third" by Poison Ivan (unusual passion) 10, 9, 9
"November Third" By Poison Ivan (poisoniv1@hotmail.com). Q. Do you know what a coolie is? A. It's a quickie in the snow. As the title suggests, the main action of this story takes place in November, and so it's not a full-blown coolie. The two lovers do it in a pile of leaves. It's hot sex, even though his dick nearly freezes when she rolls him over to get on top. And my joke is actually inappropriate for this story, because it's a very serious insight into a very serious passion. To find out what that means and what it has to do with virtual reality, you'll have to read the story. Ratings for "November Third" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 9 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 9 |