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"No Matter What They Say" by Mat Twassel (virtually public sex) 10, 9, 9
"No Matter What They Say" By Mat Twassel (Mmtwassel@aol.com). You've probably heard the old joke about the young couple who went to the marriage counselor. It was obvious that they lacked spontaneity in their marriage, and the counselor told them so. "The next time you see the twinkle in your partner's eye," concluded the therapist, "go for it!" At the next session he asked them how it went. "It was great," the guy replied. "We followed your advice and had the best sex ever." "Right," added the wife. "But we're not allowed back in McDonald's anymore." Were the present story not sent to me as an official entry to my current contest, I might have taken it as just another story about a guy having very pleasant sex with his lover in McDonald's restaurant while the children at the next table quibble with their mother over their Happy Meal toys. However, this is a virtual reality contest, and so we know that what appears to be real isn't really real. Not even if she says it's really real. Ratings for "No Matter What They Say" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 9 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 9 |