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"The Shower Tales: Maureen" by Steve R. (sex with voyeurism).
Ivan: 6, 6, 7
"The Shower Tales: Maureen" by Steve R. Guest reviewed by Poison Ivan (poisoniv1@hotmail.com). --- "The Shower Tales" is apparently a collection of stories that chronicle the real life sexual adventures of the author. In this chapter, the narrator heads to Carbondale to find a young college girl. Maureen is the one he hooks up with. Maureen gets off on making guys come. There's a quick fuck on the couch. Later, they end up in Maureen's room, which she shares with three other college girls. They fuck a couple times in Maureen's bed while Maureen's roommate surreptitiously watches and masturbates. This story definitely feels like a small chapter plucked out of a larger whole, and I'm afraid it doesn't stand very well on its own. The characters aren't very real. I didn't get a good vision of either Steve or Maureen. Commas are badly abused in this story, too. I usually enjoy stories with a little voyeurism or exhibitionism in them, so I kind of liked the bedroom sex scenes. I can see this story working as stroke material. Ratings for "The Shower Tales: Maureen" Athena (technical quality): 6 Venus (plot & character): 6 Ivan (appeal to reviewer): 7 |