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"Sevin & Dominic" by Mr. J (exhibitionism) 8, 8, 8
"Sevin & Dominic" by Mr. J (mr_j@my-dejanews.com). Sevin dresses seductively and gets onto the elevator for the long descent from the 53rd floor of her hotel. She's going to strut her stuff. Unfortunately, one of her Ben Wa balls pops out in the elevator. This is why Emily Post specifically recommends not wearing Ben Wa balls in public; or as Miss Manners says, "If you must do so, at least wear underpants." As it is, the man in the elevator simply picks it up, gives it a quick sniff and a lick, and departs with it on the Mezzanine level. When the man eventually returns the ball, Sevin is seated in a busy restaurant, bringing herself to orgasm while watching a couple at a nearby booth pleasure each other under the table. Indeed, the man reinserts the ball just where it used to be. The events are improbable but sexy. This story is incomplete, but the author has ideas for more chapters. Ratings for "Sevin & Dominic" Athena (technical quality): 8 Venus (plot & character): 8 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 8 |