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"Latin Night" by Lostgirl (sexy dancing) 9, 7, 7
"Latin Night" by Lostgirl (lostgirl33@hotmail.com). I think my review of this story may be a little unfair. Midway through the story, I lost interest in it. I finished the story, but it seemed to me that I was missing something. I think the problem is that this story depends heavily on familiarity with the type of dancing in which the characters participate. This type of dancing is not my thing, and so I became distracted by reading for information (to figure out what was happening). Someone already familiar with the dancing might be able to zero in on the emotions, which are the author's main interest. Ratings for "Latin Night" Athena (technical quality): 9 Venus (plot & character): 7 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 7 |