Return To the Celestial Review (This does NOT open a new window) Return To the Index (This does NOT open a new window) Note, to make reading multi-part stories easier, story links (links with dejanews.com or www.qz.to, NOT the review or profile links) will open up a new browser window. When you are done reading the story, or section of the story simply CLOSE the story window.

"Sex in His Tent" by Glossy (slut goes camping) 7, 6, 5 http://www.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=383104871 "Sex in His Tent" by Glossy (takeme@iamit.com). http://www.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=383104871 The woman breaks up with a guy in California, and so she drives over to Arizona and meets a guy in a campground and has sex with him in his tent. There's not a lot of personality development; but then lots of real people - even high government officials - are like that, I suppose. The story just ends with a suggestion that "maybe there will be more." My advice to the author would be to have an entire plot in mind and to proofread the story more carefully before posting the next one. Ratings for "Sex in His Tent" Athena (technical quality): 7 Venus (plot & character): 6 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 5