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"Airport" by Unknown Author (satisfaction) 10, 10, 10
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"Airport" by Unknown Author (). Actually, the title is misleading. The story only STARTS in the airport. The real eroticism begins during the ride home from the airport, while the damsel in distress with the bodaciously beautiful body slithers and writhes in the passenger seat sans panties but cum lots of other accoutrements. But suddenly the perspective shifts from his view between her legs to her own brain a few hours ago, as she contemplates the impending desolation of being alone at the end of her air trip to Houston. The first shift in perspective jarred me a little, but I soon learned to relax and enjoy it, while the perspective shifted from his to hers as the sexy couple progressed through their adventure. This is an exceptionally good story. If you skip it, you'll be missing one of the best stories of this month. Special note: This author does a splendid job at a task that every author should master: making a woman sound beautiful without expressing her bust size in mathematical notation. Quibble department: "As we continued down the corridor, she matched my pace as I carried the luggage, which was no big deal." Question: WHAT was no big deal - his carrying the luggage or her matching his pace. Using a relative clause to modify a clause (rather than to modify a noun or pronoun), is often confusing. In this case, it's no big deal; but consider this possibility: "She gave me a blowjob after I recovered from the beating, which was just what I had hoped for." Get my drift? {Note: This mistake is an aberration. This author actually uses the English language extremely effectively. Just as some guys just can't pass up a niece piece of ass, a good English teacher can't pass up a chance for a lesson on ambiguous sentence syntax on alt.sex.stories - which is abbreviated ass on a.s.s.} Ratings for "Airport" Athena (technical quality): Venus (plot & character): Celeste (appeal to reviewer): |