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"Intro to Your Seduction" by El Sol (seduction). Ivan: 9, 9, 9
"Intro to Your Seduction" by El Sol (munster@eden.rutgers.edu). Guest reviewed by Poison Ivan (poisoniv1@hotmail.com). --- The sub-title on this story is "An instructional on your seduction." And you know, I think that's as good a description of this story as you will likely find. We have a guy who decides he wants to seduce a woman. Over the following weeks, he explains how he "innocently" manipulates her until they finally end up naked together on the couch. The instructional explains how he befriends her, how he gives her backrubs, and how they go to the movies. But most of all, we are taught the importance of patience. This guy takes a long time before he ends up in the heroine's pants. I thought the story moved a little slow in places, and the instructional tone almost wore out its welcome. But it was a fascinating way to tell a story, and one that I had not read before. I would classify this story as a mostly successful experiment, and one the author should be proud of. Ratings for "Intro to Your Seduction" Athena (technical quality): 9 Venus (plot & character): 9 Ivan (appeal to reviewer): 9 |