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"Builders" by Nick (exhibitionism) 10, 10, 10
"Builders" by Nick (nick@cassandra.demon.co.uk). Remember the sexy hunk in the Coke commercial of a few years ago? He would take his shirt off and drink a Coke while all the women ogled him from nearby windows. {I didn't expect my computer to accept "ogled," but the spellcheck didn't even blink!"} Well, this story is sort of from the Coke Man's point of view. He's a working bloke on a tiny island off the coast of Europe, and he has a bod that the birds and crackers admire - sort of a "page three man," if you can imagine such a thing. And he struts his stuff. This story is a Day in His Life. No actual sex, but some good voyeurism and exhibitionism. A really nice little tale. All of which reminds us of the following story: Every day the woman watched the young landscape gardener through her kitchen window. He was tanned and blond with rippling muscles and an enticing bulge in his jeans. Two or three times a day he'd step behind the tool shed. She knew what he was doing, and her imagination soared at the thought of what he held in his hand. Finally, she saw him slip behind the shed and she hurried around the shed from the other side. There he was in all his splendid glory, pissing on the ground. Her heart leapt when she saw his penis. She blurted, "Mmmm. I'll have some of that." "Well," he drawled, "you'd better get a cup quick. I'm about finished." Ratings for "Builders" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |