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"Trouble in Paradise" by Crimson Dragon (ff romance) 10, 9, 9 http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13551.txt --- http://www.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=376997830 "Trouble in Paradise" by Crimson Dragon (dcrimson@yahoo.com). http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13551.txt --- http://www.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=376997830 Elizabeth has gone away with Dawn for a romantic vacation in a tropical paradise. Elizabeth is new at this lesbian thing, and she has to get used to Dawn sexual preferences. Very early in the story the women's hotel room is robbed. At first this seems to be a detour, but later we see the connection to the overall plot. Although the sex is very sensual, the plot and ideas don't flow quite as naturally as I would have liked. But it's still a very good story. Ratings for "Trouble in Paradise" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 9 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 9